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JelenaŦ Bill's Favourite Fan
Number of posts : 6371 Age : 27 Location : Serbia ( in Bill's room :3 ) Registration date : 2010-02-28
| Subject: ~...Take my hand and never let go...~ Sat May 01, 2010 11:19 pm | |
| CHAPTER 1:
It was a cold night...I went out for a walk...I was disappointed in my life...I felt like no one on this world loves me...I just wanted to disappear...I was walking alone thinking : "will anyone miss me if I kill myself?! "...I felt like killing myself,so I went up on the roof of one old house...All I was thinking was "This world doesn't need me"...So I slowly climbed on the top of the roof and I was ready to jump...In that second a boy was screaming " Don't jump, don't jump!!!" and he pulled me back...I fell down on him...I started crying and shouting " Can't I even kill myself?!?!"...Then I turned around and saw a beautiful boy with black hair and sparkled brown eyes...
Boy: Are you crazy?!? why did you want to kill yourself?? - I looked him in the eyes- you just don't understand me!!! Boy: Understand what!? - It doesn't matter... Boy: Are you okay?? - No, my life sucks! Leave me alone! Boy: No, I'm not gonna let you try to kill yourself again!! - Please...just,just let me die!! Boy: You won't die!! You don't need to do this!! - No, I have to!! Boy: Please...just don't!!! - I wiped away my tears- ok...I won't do it... Boy: Thank you god!!!
He took my hand and pulled me up.I was barely standing on my feet.He took me to the bench and we sat there.
Boy: So what's your name?? - Jelena. Yours Boy: I'm Bill. - Thanks for saving my life Bill: It's ok.Just please don't try to jump again! - I hope I won't! Bill: are you cold??? - A little. Bill: Come on, I'll help you walk home. - Thanks.
So we were walking like 15 minutes... -Here's my home. Bill: Great.Do you need anymore help?? -No, thank you.You done enough for me today. Bill: Ok. Hope I'll see you again.Good night. - Night!
I entered my home and ran straight to my room.
~Later...~
Mom: Jelena sweety where were you??Can I come in?? - Yeah mom come in... Mom: So where were you?? - I was out! Mom: Oh ok.Sweety is there something bothering you, you need to tell me something? - I looked down - no mom there isn't. Mom: Ok dear.But if there is you know you can tell me. - Ofcourse mom.Thanks. Mom: Good night sweety. - Night mom.
She left my room.I lay down on my bed.There were thousand things running through my mind.I just closed my eyes and I tried to forget the whole thing that happened today...
~To be continued~ | |
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Amoureuse de Bill Wonders If It's Tokio Or Tokyo
Number of posts : 138 Age : 33 Location : Morocco,Casablanca Registration date : 2010-02-10
| Subject: Re: ~...Take my hand and never let go...~ Sun May 02, 2010 1:02 am | |
| wow that's a great beginning for the story keep it up | |
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Träumerella In Tom's Car
Number of posts : 1685 Age : 29 Location : AntalyaCity, TR Registration date : 2010-01-21
| Subject: Re: ~...Take my hand and never let go...~ Sun May 02, 2010 8:18 am | |
| Awiiiiic!! <3 Soo nice chapter jelena! <3 Love | |
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JelenaŦ Bill's Favourite Fan
Number of posts : 6371 Age : 27 Location : Serbia ( in Bill's room :3 ) Registration date : 2010-02-28
| Subject: Re: ~...Take my hand and never let go...~ Sun May 02, 2010 9:26 am | |
| thanks guys... I love ya!!!<33 | |
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TK.ObsessiveDisorder Rockin With Tokio Hotel
Number of posts : 1408 Age : 28 Location : Paranaque City Registration date : 2010-04-04
| Subject: Re: ~...Take my hand and never let go...~ Sun May 02, 2010 11:49 am | |
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JelenaŦ Bill's Favourite Fan
Number of posts : 6371 Age : 27 Location : Serbia ( in Bill's room :3 ) Registration date : 2010-02-28
| Subject: Re: ~...Take my hand and never let go...~ Sun May 02, 2010 6:45 pm | |
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AHz-7♥ Rockin With Tokio Hotel
Number of posts : 1389 Age : 28 Location : Middle East, dubai. Registration date : 2010-03-18
| Subject: Re: ~...Take my hand and never let go...~ Sun May 02, 2010 7:00 pm | |
| Yay! Jelena's fan-fic at last ! I love it <3 Keep it up sis ^^ | |
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JelenaŦ Bill's Favourite Fan
Number of posts : 6371 Age : 27 Location : Serbia ( in Bill's room :3 ) Registration date : 2010-02-28
| Subject: Re: ~...Take my hand and never let go...~ Sun May 02, 2010 7:06 pm | |
| yeah at last... <33 But I can't post new chapters everyday because of school...but I'll try to post the whenever I have free time.... | |
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Träumerella In Tom's Car
Number of posts : 1685 Age : 29 Location : AntalyaCity, TR Registration date : 2010-01-21
| Subject: Re: ~...Take my hand and never let go...~ Sun May 02, 2010 8:14 pm | |
| it's ok sissy <3 I will wait for #2 chapter! | |
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LelylovesBill Bill's Favourite Fan
Number of posts : 4828 Age : 28 Location : Croatia Registration date : 2010-04-05
| Subject: Re: ~...Take my hand and never let go...~ Sun May 02, 2010 8:34 pm | |
| Jelena, ovo je ... OMG! *-* preeedobro i onda kažeš da ne znaš pisati, a? haha ^^ sviđa mi see *don't juuump* <3 i ofc - Billie <3 ! hmm .. samo tako nastavi (zvuči čudno na hrvatskom xD) volim tee!<3 | |
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JelenaŦ Bill's Favourite Fan
Number of posts : 6371 Age : 27 Location : Serbia ( in Bill's room :3 ) Registration date : 2010-02-28
| Subject: Re: ~...Take my hand and never let go...~ Sun May 02, 2010 8:52 pm | |
| jao hwala ljubawi!!! <33 xD pa neznam pisati.... juce sam slusala don't jump...pa sam dobila neku inspiraciju...xD stwarno hwala puno....wtppp.... ali zao mi je sto necu moci swako wece da stawim nowi chapter.... ali pokusacu sutra kad ustanem da stawim nowi...<333 wtnncsijw....<333 | |
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LelylovesBill Bill's Favourite Fan
Number of posts : 4828 Age : 28 Location : Croatia Registration date : 2010-04-05
| Subject: Re: ~...Take my hand and never let go...~ Sun May 02, 2010 9:53 pm | |
| awwww zašto nećeš moći svaku večer? *-* ma jooj, nema na čemu ^^ fkt je dobro hehe volim te puno <3<3<3 | |
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JelenaŦ Bill's Favourite Fan
Number of posts : 6371 Age : 27 Location : Serbia ( in Bill's room :3 ) Registration date : 2010-02-28
| Subject: Re: ~...Take my hand and never let go...~ Sun May 02, 2010 10:14 pm | |
| a zbog skole...sutra cu stawiti nowi...ali ipak sad je jos malo kraj skole...imamo puno kontrolnih zadataka...i odgowaranja... :/ pa zato... LoL... pogodi ko se pojawljuje u sledecem chapteru?? wtnnnn...<333 | |
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LelylovesBill Bill's Favourite Fan
Number of posts : 4828 Age : 28 Location : Croatia Registration date : 2010-04-05
| Subject: Re: ~...Take my hand and never let go...~ Sun May 02, 2010 10:22 pm | |
| ahaa, awwwi, pa sretno sa školom .. i ja isto tako =/ aaaaaaaaaaaa ja!? *-* OMG! ljuubiim teee!<3 | |
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JelenaŦ Bill's Favourite Fan
Number of posts : 6371 Age : 27 Location : Serbia ( in Bill's room :3 ) Registration date : 2010-02-28
| Subject: Re: ~...Take my hand and never let go...~ Sun May 02, 2010 10:34 pm | |
| NARAWNO!!!KO DRUGI?!?! xD wtnnnnn!!!<333
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JelenaŦ Bill's Favourite Fan
Number of posts : 6371 Age : 27 Location : Serbia ( in Bill's room :3 ) Registration date : 2010-02-28
| Subject: Re: ~...Take my hand and never let go...~ Sun May 02, 2010 11:27 pm | |
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LelylovesBill Bill's Favourite Fan
Number of posts : 4828 Age : 28 Location : Croatia Registration date : 2010-04-05
| Subject: Re: ~...Take my hand and never let go...~ Mon May 03, 2010 5:36 pm | |
| aaaaaaaaaaaa srećooo mojaaa ^^ preeeedobroo je *Lely likes it tarara Lely likes it* xD woohoo! ja sam lik hvala tiiii :* volim te<3<3 | |
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Träumerella In Tom's Car
Number of posts : 1685 Age : 29 Location : AntalyaCity, TR Registration date : 2010-01-21
| Subject: Re: ~...Take my hand and never let go...~ Mon May 03, 2010 6:05 pm | |
| ohh i like this chapter keep it up hon <3 Love ya | |
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JelenaŦ Bill's Favourite Fan
Number of posts : 6371 Age : 27 Location : Serbia ( in Bill's room :3 ) Registration date : 2010-02-28
| Subject: Re: ~...Take my hand and never let go...~ Mon May 03, 2010 7:06 pm | |
| aww...Drago mi je da ti se swidja mamice...xD A slika na profu ti je msm...WOW O.O!!! prelepa!!!!!! Wtnnnnn....<333 thanks sis....I love ya!!! <333 | |
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AHz-7♥ Rockin With Tokio Hotel
Number of posts : 1389 Age : 28 Location : Middle East, dubai. Registration date : 2010-03-18
| Subject: Re: ~...Take my hand and never let go...~ Mon May 03, 2010 7:16 pm | |
| woah, time machine cool Nice chapter <3 Keep it up sis ^^ | |
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JelenaŦ Bill's Favourite Fan
Number of posts : 6371 Age : 27 Location : Serbia ( in Bill's room :3 ) Registration date : 2010-02-28
| Subject: Re: ~...Take my hand and never let go...~ Mon May 03, 2010 7:21 pm | |
| LoL...yeah...I didn't have a better idea...XD thanks... love ya!!! <33 | |
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AHz-7♥ Rockin With Tokio Hotel
Number of posts : 1389 Age : 28 Location : Middle East, dubai. Registration date : 2010-03-18
| Subject: Re: ~...Take my hand and never let go...~ Mon May 03, 2010 7:29 pm | |
| You're welcome <33 Love you moooooore <333 | |
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JelenaŦ Bill's Favourite Fan
Number of posts : 6371 Age : 27 Location : Serbia ( in Bill's room :3 ) Registration date : 2010-02-28
| Subject: Re: ~...Take my hand and never let go...~ Mon May 03, 2010 7:34 pm | |
| awww....<333 Love you the most!!! <333 | |
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LelylovesBill Bill's Favourite Fan
Number of posts : 4828 Age : 28 Location : Croatia Registration date : 2010-04-05
| Subject: Re: ~...Take my hand and never let go...~ Mon May 03, 2010 7:43 pm | |
| haha ma divnoo je kčeri moja ^^ awwwii hvala tebi *-* ti si ljepša <3 vtp!<3 | |
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JelenaŦ Bill's Favourite Fan
Number of posts : 6371 Age : 27 Location : Serbia ( in Bill's room :3 ) Registration date : 2010-02-28
| Subject: Re: ~...Take my hand and never let go...~ Mon May 03, 2010 7:56 pm | |
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