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Subject: Re: *~.............~ Wed Aug 04, 2010 1:28 pm

Ohhhhhh this reminds me of the fight in Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows. Except that this has technology, is set in future and also has Bill XD Well written btw Very Happy

Subject: Re: *~.............~ Wed Aug 04, 2010 5:06 pm

hahaha!!! thanks!! im glad you liked it!!! <3 <3

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Subject: Re: *~.............~ Wed Aug 04, 2010 8:23 pm

WOW, I cool new bomb that's new Very Happy

But now the news has to be broken about Melly and Grover ooooh Sad

Subject: Re: *~.............~ Wed Aug 04, 2010 8:35 pm

yeah....it's really sad...thanks...xD <3

Subject: Re: *~.............~ Wed Aug 04, 2010 8:47 pm

Your welcome Smile

And hey, should I post like three paragraphs for the first story and let the suspense settle in or should I write all of it till the end of the first mystery? Razz

Subject: Re: *~.............~ Wed Aug 04, 2010 10:23 pm

ummm whatever suits you...as long as you post soon...hehehe!!!

Subject: Re: *~.............~ Thu Aug 05, 2010 9:47 am

It's already posted XD Hope you like it Wink

Subject: Re: *~.............~ Thu Aug 05, 2010 10:13 am

oooh!!!! hhehehehe im gonna read it now!!! hehehe xD YAY!!!! <3

Subject: Re: *~.............~ Thu Aug 05, 2010 2:11 pm

Lol XD So whens the next chapter coming? XP

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Subject: Re: *~.............~ Thu Aug 05, 2010 5:37 pm

Aww thats sweet of Tom, well sorry I didn't comment earlier when I saw it because I couldn't read it and I had to go ........... LOL XD Well written, I really loved it Smile

Subject: Re: *~.............~ Thu Aug 05, 2010 11:34 pm

hehehe yeah!! thank you!!!! and you're forgiven!!! lol!!! xD <3

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Subject: Re: *~.............~ Fri Aug 06, 2010 10:01 pm

Hehe lol XD Well written, I really liked it. It looks like you were in denial when he told you that Melly and Grover were dead like you had a dream and you saw that Bill was also gone, so that denial Razz

Subject: Re: *~.............~ Fri Aug 06, 2010 10:55 pm

yeah..she was in shock..when she fell asleep she was convinced that the real thing that happened was only in her dream..she believed that Melly and Grover died for real in her dream only..
btw thanks!!! I hope you really liked it!!! xD <3

Subject: Re: *~.............~ Sat Aug 07, 2010 8:43 am

Yeah, psychology Razz

You have to get out of denial XD

Subject: Re: *~.............~ Sat Aug 07, 2010 9:18 am

hehehehe yeah...lol xD

Subject: Re: *~.............~ Sat Aug 07, 2010 1:30 pm

UGH! Sorry I won't read anything or even come online today I'm sorry because I only have the net for two hours and I have to buy the net to use even for an hour :/ Hehe but tomorrow I think I'll be writing the next chapter with my cuz XD

Subject: Re: *~.............~ Sat Aug 07, 2010 4:28 pm

its ok!!! i was wondering when you would post the next chapter!! hehehe xD cant wait!!! xD <3

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Subject: Re: *~.............~ Sun Aug 08, 2010 12:58 pm

Awwwi sad

I only remember one funeral my granddads :/ But the thing is I didn't cry because I was too small Razz

Subject: Re: *~.............~ Sun Aug 08, 2010 1:03 pm

yeah..ive never been at a funeral..i dont think i can handle it..lol...
im glad you liked the chapter!!! <3

Subject: Re: *~.............~ Sun Aug 08, 2010 3:03 pm

Yeah me too XD I had too but if I go to somebody's who I know then I'll definitely cry Razz

Hehe no problemo XD

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