& Everything changed...

Subject: & Everything changed... Sat Jul 10, 2010 6:41 pm

Hei guys!
Here is my new fanfiction! I hope you'll like it (:
This Fanfiction different to my other fictions, I thought about this fiction I want make this fanfiction be unique, and then this fiction about Tom kaulitz.
Well, I talk too much! I wrote something like trailer.
I'll put it now, Then tomorrow 1st chaper will come! (:
Enjoy ~

Rainy day~

'Everything is ready now!' he said, and looked her into blue eyes...she cried and gave him a pack when he went into the car. She yelled 'Stop!' then she took a breath, 'Can I hug her for the last time?', he nodded then She took the baby from the pack...Hugged and kissed the baby, the baby smiled to the woman. 'What will my baby's name be?' she asked...But he didn’t answer to her question... the baby again smiled to the woman...then she looked to the sky...it was all dark...she remembered this name -Melanie- which means -Darkness- and again looked at the baby, 'Melanie...Melanie', he looked at the watch 'Time to go...now her name is Melanie?' he asked the woman...'Yes' She said...He went to the car, Her tears fell down.

to be continued.
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this photo not about the fanfiction i just like it.

Subject: Re: & Everything changed... Sat Jul 10, 2010 9:13 pm

Intresting .. Very Happy

I can't wait to read the first chapter ^^

Subject: Re: & Everything changed... Sat Jul 10, 2010 9:48 pm

awww it seems so nice *.*
great sis ^^
i can't wait <3

Subject: Re: & Everything changed... Sun Jul 11, 2010 12:58 am

wow....I like it ^^
also a pretty name... <33

Subject: Re: & Everything changed... Sun Jul 11, 2010 1:14 pm

Thank u girls! Im glad you all like it! (: then here is the 1st chapter!
Enjoy~

1# Chapter;

17 years passed....

'Tom shut up!' she said with an angry voice...Tom took a breath then continued 'Look mell, you can't go with him!', she looked into his eyes,'Why? This is my life!' she was so angry from him,'Because I don't want!' This time tom was so angry too,' Who are you?,Who are you in my life? You're not my boyfriend or my father or my-' she said,then she shut up,Because she understood ,she did the biggest mistake in her life,that's so bad...she knows ,but Tom made her so angry...then Tom knew this too, she cant control herself when she is angry, 'I thought im your family Melanie' he said it with a relaxed tone. those words could kill her, Tom...He is everything she has, she thought why is Tom always like that?, He took his bag,'Tom! (Whisper) Im sorry' she said, she took her bag too, then watched the sea...Her phone rang, she saw this name -Matt- , she clicked the green button...
-Alo Melanie?
-Matt
-What happened, why you didnt come to the cafe? did u forget?
-No,matt look I-
-That boy didn't allow you ,right? Why is he always like this? Who is he?
-Matt...
-Melanie , You should say something to Tom... because he can't be your brother mell! he-
-SHUT UP MATT!
-Sweety why are you so angry? I understand you're angry at Tom, then no-
-Matt now shut up and listen to me! Im not angry at Tom! Because I broke his heart because of you, and nobody calls me 'Mell' except Tom!, btw he is not my brother , He is my FAMILY! This measn , He is all what I have.
-Melanie... I guess Tom is there and you can't talk confidently , don't worry I'll call you another time..
-don't call me! ever!
She clicked the red button, she cried... she understood this a bit late, Tom is more important than Matt to her.

#At the student dormitory

'Melanie! Are you okey sweety?' Melody said with panicked tone, Melanie just nodded then went to her room,' by the way,did you see Andreas?' Melody asked,'No' Melanie answered it with a very cold voice.'I thought you're with Tom,did he see Andreas?' Melody asked again, 'Melody,Can you leave me alone? Go to Tom's room you can find andreas there!' Melanie said,'O-okay' Melody went outside, Melanie took a shower, wore Tom's t-shirt...She didn't want to cry but she cried,*Tock tock tock* ,'Look melody, I need to be alone! please go to your boyfriend!' Melanie said with an angry tone, she thought melody can't understand her,'Mell!', Melanie excited! who can call her like -mell- TOM!,'Tom?' she said...'Can I talk with you?' Tom asked, 'Sure,come here' she said then she wiped her tears with her hands, Tom opened the door ,then sat on her bed, ' I...-' Tom tried to say something but melanies phone rang, She saw again same name, -Matt-, she panicked, Tom and melanie looked at each other,'Why didn’t you answer?' Tom asked then continued 'If you cant talk when im here i can go' he said then stood up, 'Tom!, I just don't want to talk with him' melanie said it so fast, she wondered what happened to their friendship, Melanie&Tom were friends ever since they opened their eyes to the world,
'Im nothing for you but can i ask who is he? and why you dont want to talk with him?' Tom asked,melanie almost cried...'Tom you're my family, you know, He is...Matt' she said this with so sad tone.'Whaat?, Look mell if you love hi-' He couldn't continue, 'No no no no!I dont love him!' Melanie said this so fast,He held her 'Is he boring you? or is he making you feel uncomfortable?' he asked.'Umm,I..He does sometimes' Melanie answered like this because she is scared, If Tom and Matt fight, oh god! she doesn't want to think about this...'Mell!Tell me the truth' he said when she thought about the fight,'I said!He does sometimes,well whatever what did you want to tell me?' she said then clicked the red button, but Matt called again.'Can I take your phone?' Tom asked with his angelic voice,'Tom , no please' she said,Tom took the phone to her hand slowly,'Can you go outside?' Tom asked with his angelic voice again,'Tom-' she tried to say -don't do it please-,'Mell please.' Tom said, Melanie went outside, she saw Melody infront of the door!'That's so bad Melody! you're 17 years old! you still listen to me at the door!' Melanie said with a half angry voice,'I-Im Sososorry' Melody said then continued 'I just want to take my jacket, you know this room is our room, we live here together with you', Melanie laughed because she talked about so many things that are not about this subject!At that moment Andreas came here 'What are you doing girls?' Andreas asked,'Im kidding with your girlfriend!' Melanie answered and smiled,'Oh don't touch my baby' Andreas said, then hugged Melody,'She is kidding with me so badly!' Melody said with sadly voice,'I'll bite her,Don't worry darling!'Andreas said to Melody...'Im damn hungry!' Melanie said, 'Let's go to the canteen and eat something, I think dinner will start so soon' Melody answered,'Okay Girls let's go!' Andreas said then all of us went to the canteen and waited for dinner, but Melanie was thinking all of the time about tom and matt...Tom came to the Canteen, but didn't talk with anybody, just ate something and gave melanie her phone then went to his room, Melanie wondered what's going on with him...

to be continued.

Subject: Re: & Everything changed... Sun Jul 11, 2010 5:37 pm

aww...It's so beautiful...
It's so different...So amazing.... ^^
I just know it will be awesome... <33
You really know how to write an amazing story...<33
I LOVE IT!!! I love you

Can you just please put a different color of the letters cuz It's a little bit hard to read the purple ones...If you can please... ^^
kissesss

Subject: Re: & Everything changed... Sun Jul 11, 2010 7:35 pm

Thank u, I just love to write and im glad you like it jelena^^
I changed the color, that's my fave color green <3

Subject: Re: & Everything changed... Sun Jul 11, 2010 8:27 pm

ahhh i love it sis *-*
can't wait to read the next chap next week ^^
awwwi<3

Subject: Re: & Everything changed... Sun Jul 11, 2010 11:31 pm

Thank u sis ^_^
Im start to write it, When it's finish I'll post it here! (:

Subject: Re: & Everything changed... Mon Jul 12, 2010 4:01 am

I love it ! <33
I'm excited to know what happens next bounce

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Subject: Re: & Everything changed... Mon Jul 12, 2010 1:42 pm

Thanks 4 changing the color Hilal ^^ <33

Subject: Re: & Everything changed... Mon Jul 12, 2010 6:02 pm

Thank u Aaesha, I dont know when i can post the new chapter but im still writing it^^
No problem Jelena <3

Subject: Re: & Everything changed... Mon Jul 12, 2010 9:54 pm

awww *.* woo! i'm excited ^^

Subject: Re: & Everything changed... Tue Jul 13, 2010 6:19 am

You're welcome, Take your time <3 Very Happy

Subject: Re: & Everything changed... Mon Jul 19, 2010 6:49 pm

I just want to say sorry, I came from the holiday... and Im red >.< so whatever thanks for your comments here is the new chapter , enjoy~

2# Chapter ;

When dinner finished, Everybody went to their own room. Andreas and melody held each other’s hands then went to the garden.
Melanie was all alone, she went to her room, and wore jacket because she was cold.
Then she went to the canteen again, bought one coffee, went to the garden, and sat on the bench. Berlin was snowy, she laughed at herself and remembered when tom and her were children, they were playing here all of the time on Christmas night! she took some snow, and she saw Melody. Melody was crying...

'Hey what happened sweety?' Melanie asked, and looked at her face, Melody wiped her tears away with her hands,'Im just feeling sad for the little baby, do you know today Katy brought one baby here, the baby is like us, it does not have a family, and always smiles...I feel sorry for the baby' Melody answered,'Oh, but I came here when i was a baby too, then tom too,We all dont have a family, but in the same time we're all one family,Im happy because I've a big family! I dont care about my real family, because my family is here!' Melanie said with a happy voice, then Melody smiled at her and hugged her,'you're a good friend melanie' Melody said it when she hugged her,'Do you want to see the baby?' Melody asked melanie,'Tomorrow , we can look at her' Melanie said,'Im going to my room, don't you want to come?' Melody asked,'No,I'll stay here a little bit more' Melanie said...
when melody went into her room, she saw tom, 'Hey tom!' Melody said then continued 'I think, you should talk with melanie, she is sad', tom didnt say anything, then went to the garden...

'leb' deine träume dann gehört dir die welt du weißt ganz alleine was dir gefällt du musst kein sieger sein mach dich nie wieder klein leb' deine träume...' Melanie was singing a song, when she finished , tom clapped for her,'Tom' she said
'Mellie' Tom said,'tom you know i hate this nickname! mell is the best' she said then tom hugged her,'I know, you should be a singer, must know, I have, whatever, why you're sad?' tom said in a sad tone,' You have what?' Melanie said with a wonderful tone,'Look you should promise me, dont tell anyone, someone said to me, I have a twin, his name is Bill, he is famous!' Tom said this sadly,'Oh really?' Melanie asked and she was shocked. 'Yes but i dont want to talk with him! I dont want to see him' tom was so mad at bill.

'Hey big man! Are you crying?' Melanie said this with a funny voice, Tom stood up,'oh no, but so soon you'll cry because of laughing!' he said then he tickled melanie,'Sto-pp!' she said it when she laughed, 'Look you're crying because of me, dont cry I'll give you candy my child!' tom said and laughed at her, then Melanie tried to tickle him but they fell down, Tom could feel her breath and heart beats, tom thought -Melanie has magical eyes, blue and deeper than the ocean- ,'Im sorry' melanie said, shy, and she tried to stand up but tom took her arm...

to be continued.

Subject: Re: & Everything changed... Mon Jul 19, 2010 7:00 pm

awwww so sweet ^^
<3

Subject: Re: & Everything changed... Mon Jul 19, 2010 9:15 pm

awesome <33

Subject: Re: & Everything changed... Fri Jul 30, 2010 3:01 pm

Thank you both <3

Chapter 3:

'I won!' Tom said, Melanie stood up and smile at him.
'Yes you won! congrats!' Melanie said and hugged him,
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At morning#

'Goooooooooddd morrrniiinnngggg!' Melanie said to melody but...melody was still sleeping, Melanie shook her slowly,
'Melanie! for god sake leave me alone!' Melody said.
'But...isn't today important?' Melanie asked in a sad tone,
'No! Today is a normal day, Melanie what happened to you, be normal please.' Melody said and took her pillow and continued her sleep...
Melanie took her jacket and went outside, today is her birthday but melody, her BEST friend didnt remember that, today is a normal day...yeah who cares about melanie?
and she saw tom...and she thought tom would never forget her birthday...
'Hey tom good morning!' Melanie said and smiled at tom,
'morning.' Tom said it with a cold voice,
'Are you okay?' Melanie asked to Tom, she cared about him...
'Yes, Im just planning to sleep allday' Tom answered, what a disillusion!
'Isn't today important for you or for anyone?' Melanie asked
'Ummm I remembered!' Tom said...
'Really? I knew I knew! you never forget it' Melanie said and hugged Tom...
'Yeah today I have a basketball match!' Tom said
'Whaaat?!' Melanie stopped hugging him
'Hey Tom!' Ashley said,
'Hi!' Tom said and they went somewhere,
Melanie felt forgetten, oh she is forgetten! All her friends how can they forget her birthday? She closed her eyes and said - 1 2 3 - and opened her eyes but nothing changed, she understood that this is not a dream or nightmare!

## Happy birthday my angel! I love you so much,you broke up with me but i wont break up with you,you will be mine forever...Happy birthday again, best wishes...
Ps: your gift is waiting for you at the sea side, go there and take it...

Matt##

She couldnt believe it! Matt remembered her birthday but others! they didnt remember...maybe Matt really loves her, if he loves her why would he cheat on Melanie with another girl...
and she knew...
she is in love with, khm...

Melanie went to her room and watched TV,

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MTV~

Interview-man: Yes here is Bill Kaulitz! Hi Bill, How you feel now? you won the EMA award.
Bill Kaulitz: That's amazing...I really can't describe it, I just want to say Thank you for my fans! I love you all...
Interview-man: Okay, What do you want to say to your lebanese fans, they really want to see you live there.
Bill Kaulitz: I want to say see you all soon at lebanon, We're planning to go lebanon so soon, our next tour is almost starting our second country is lebanon!
Interview-man: That's really nice for lebanese fans! here we have some rumors about you, do you have girlfriend?
Bill Kaulitz: Ahhaha no, Im still wait for true love...But i wish one girlfriend.
Interview-man: Another rumor about you, do you really have twin? is he staying in a boarding school? we know his name Tom Kaulitz...is he your twin?
Bill Kaulitz: It's enough i dont want hear things like that! I wont answer those questions...
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He ran into his car, Melanie thought tom was not kidding about that,

she wanted to know what her gift from Matt is, but if she goes there will it be right?
and melanie thought what bad things could happen?...
she wore her jacket and went to the sea side,

'Melanie! I knew you will come here!' Matt said,
'I just want to see my gift, do you know that nobody remembered my birthday except you.' Melanie said in a sad tone,
'I can never forget your birthday' Matt said and gave her one pack,
'Oh Im excited, thank you Matt!' Melanie said and tried to open that pack but she couldnt open it, Matt helped her...

Melanie took that necklace, it was a very nice silver necklace one angel symbol on it...
Matt hugged her 'You are my angel' he said and kissed her hair,
Melanie was confused, should she accept this gift or runaway from here?
should she hug him too or kick him?

Matt gave her 2 tickets,
'For us, Holiday in Maldives' Matt said,
'Matt, look i can't-'
He kissed her, she putted her hands on his stomach, she was all confused, but she pushed him...
'Matt stop please!' Melanie said,
'What's problem, I love you and you love me too, can't we forget the past?' Matt asked,
'Matt the problem is me, I do not love you,sorry' Melanie said and walked away
'I know you love Tom, right?' Matt yelled at back to her,
'No, he is just like my brother!' Melanie said,
'He sees you like his sister but you, you see him like what?' Matt yelled again
Melanie didnt answer and tried to walk faster,

she felt so bad,
'Matt is right,I love him but he,tom, just sees me like his sister, im not important for him! he didnt remember my birthday, maybe he doesnt remember our secret place anymore' Melanie whispered to herself,

'Omg, you look terrible melanie!' Melody said,
'I know, I just want to sleep!' Melanie said it with an angry voice,
'No, Tom wanst to see you at his basketball match' Melody said,
'But i dont want!' Melanie said and hugged her pillow tighter
'Melanie! c'mon! don't you want to be there?' Melody asked to melanie but she stood up,
'Look melody, he doesnt need me he has Ashley, she is a cheerleader... and i cant be like her, and if tom asked you something about this, just say -She is sleeping!- now goodnight and have fun there!' Melanie said and continued her sleep,

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'Omg, how long have i slept?' Melanie asked herself, and turned on the lights,looked the time, 03:00 night...
she wore her shoes and went to canteen to take water, but she fell when she went downstairs...
'F*ck! who can put a banana here?! stupid people!' melanie said and continued walking,she turned on the lights and
'HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU! HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!' Almost all school was there and they all were singing that song,
'Omg! I can't say anything! i thought you all forgot my birthday!' Melanie said, the canteen was awesome with party stuff,
'How can we forget your birthday sweetie?' Melody asked,
'I know im stupid but i don't know you all seemed like you didnt remember my birthday!' melanie said and hugged her friend,
Andreas gave one pack...
'This gift from me and melody i hope you will like it' Andreas said,
'Awww that Hello kitty is so cute! thank you both' melanie said and hugged Andreas and melody
'You should see Toms gift!' melody whispered into melanies ear,

Everybody gave their gifts to melanie,
'Are you ready for your gift?' Tom asked her but she could faint, she was so excited,
'Yes!' Melanie said,
'Okay, follow me' tom took her hand and they went out
'Now you should close your eyes but if you look secretly i wont give you your gift okay?' Tom asked
'Ummm okay' Melanie said and closed her eyes...

'Here, open your eyes...' Tom said
'To-Tomm! Oh my dear god!' Melanie was shoocked,
'How do you find it?' Tom asked
'It is just so cute!' melanie said and hugged Tom

To be continue.

Subject: Re: & Everything changed... Fri Jul 30, 2010 9:13 pm

Omg. sorry I missed 2 chapters Sad

Your story is so cute Very Happy

Keep it up Wink

Subject: Re: & Everything changed... Thu Aug 12, 2010 6:52 pm

i just read your story...its so freakin awesome!!!!!
keep it up!!! i love it!!! xD its so different!!! xD <3
post soon!! xD