*Try to see world through my eyes

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Mon May 10, 2010 7:39 pm

We're all like her pretty photo!! :DD

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Mon May 10, 2010 7:47 pm

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Mon May 10, 2010 7:54 pm

<3 <3 <3 <3 Embarassed

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Mon May 10, 2010 7:55 pm

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Mon May 10, 2010 9:48 pm

Karen's PRETTY!!! <333

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Mon May 10, 2010 9:54 pm

hehehehe!! thank u!! <3 <3 <3

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Mon May 10, 2010 9:57 pm

yep ^^

~ 23RD CHAPTER ~

#Bill talking#

Jelena : Bill, what are you saying?
-I'm not sure does she-
Jelena : Stop! – she stopped me before i even ended my sentence – don't say something you might regret later.
-Jelena, do you really think she loves me? – i looked down.
Jelena : I've never seen her as happy as when she's with you. She wants to be with you – forever!
I looked at Jelena again. She was smiling. Should i believe her words?
Jelena : You love her.
-Yeah…
Jelena : Then prove to yourself she loves you back Very Happy

-How?
Jelena : Go to her, tell her your feelings and fight for her. Against everything!
I smiled. She's right, i gotta make it sure are we two meant to be.

#Lely talking#

My tears were crashing down my face. What is happening? Why is this happening?!
-I'm sorry! I'm sorry! – i said in tears – please, stop!
Peter : So, you love me? – he stopped yelling and started smiling at me now.
-I… - i couldn't say it. I don't love him. But either way, he's going to kill me.
Peter : Do you?
-I…
He grabbed my shoulders again and started shaking me – Peter : Do you?! Do you??!!

Something inside me exploded. I couldn't take this anymore. I was buring and i just yelled – No!
I knew it's over now.
I saw him taking something out of his pocket. I've never seen so much anger in one person.
Suddenly, he took a gun out of his jacket and aimed it at me.
-W-what are you doing? Please, don't do that. Just walk away, nothing will happen. Please… I love you. Here, i said it. Please don't kill me.
Peter : It's over now…
I just closed my eyes. I am dead. It's over.

*BOOM!*

#Bill talking#

I was running to Lely's house. Nothing could have stopped me now. i just wanted to see do we both feel the same.
When i knocked on her door, her mom opened and said she's out with Lucas.
Lucas!
I called him on the cell phone.

Lucas : Yes? – he answered the phone.
-Hey. It's Bill.
Lucas : Oh, hey.
-Umm, Lely… She is with you?
Lucas : I… Actually…

He told me where to come. That something happened.
I was scared. What happened now?

I was running to her grandma's building now. It started raining heavily.
-Gosh!
My everything hurt, but it didn't matter.
Then i remembered my jacket that Lely got in that package.
Why did i remember that?
Suddenly, i stopped running. I looked back, at Lely's building.
I was standing there for a minute.
Then some old guy came to me : ' What are you waiting for? '
I turned – What? You are talking to me? O.o
' Yes. '
-Do i know you?
' Just go to her and help her. She's scared. And waits for you. Run! '
-What are you talking about?
' Do you believe in a happy end? '
-I… guess.
' And that good always wins bad? '
-Well, we're not in a fairytale =/
' But do you believe in it? '
-I'd like to believe.
' Nothing happens with no reason. You just have to believe and trust the one you love. Don't ever turn your back to persons you'll might need in future. '

I was looking at him cnfusedly. What was he talking about?
Why would i ever turn my back to people i care about?
-W-
' Don't talk. Go where you need to go. And don't stop again. Just run. '
He pushed me. I started walking. When i turned he… wasn't there anymore.
-What the hell was this?

I just started running to Lely. Now everything in my head was mixed.
-Ccc. Weird!

I was near Lely's grandma's building. Then i saw Lucas coming out of the building with some old lady. I guess it's her grandma.
I saw Lucas running to a bench. Lely was lying on it.
I think… everything was covered in blood.

Lucas : Lely!
He was sitting next to her body. Then he looked up, at me.
He just waved with his head. I saw terrified look in his eyes.
I fastly run to a bench.
-LELY!

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Mon May 10, 2010 10:09 pm

omg!!!!! what happens next!?!?!?!?!?!? =(

my heart is beating so fast!!!! </3

please post soon!!! Sad

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Mon May 10, 2010 10:21 pm

OMG! noo

lely you killed your character in the story Razz

Nice chapter though<33 ^^

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Mon May 10, 2010 10:48 pm

OmG....Lely are you alive!??!?!
Baby don't die......<333333
Bill loves you!!!
Please post soon....
Don't make u wait...cuz I can't sleep now...I don't know what will happen!!! Sad

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Mon May 10, 2010 11:26 pm

aww, it can't end this way :/

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Tue May 11, 2010 1:47 am

No, no, please Lely don't die Sad

If you die I die
PLEASE

P.S: Post next chapter soon Razz

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Tue May 11, 2010 4:27 pm

haha

well thanks everybody <3
you'll see everything in the next chapter ^^
which, hopefully, will be done today Wink

i love you all!<3

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Tue May 11, 2010 4:32 pm

yay!!!! anytime sweety!!! <3

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Tue May 11, 2010 4:44 pm

hehe ^^ <3<3

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Tue May 11, 2010 8:27 pm

~ 24TH CHAPTER ~

#Bill TAlking#

-LELY!
I yelled and ran to a bench. Lucas was hugging her.
There was blood everywhere.
My look carried on… some guy was lying on the ground, all covered in blood.
I was speechless.
Then i realized what happened and fastly came to Lely. She was crying. Her hands were covered in blood.
Lely : Sad

I thought he's going to kill me, but he…
Lucas : Shhh… shhh… - he was trying to calm her down.
But i couldn't move. I was just standing there, like a fool.
Lely : I just wanna go home Sad

- she was still crying.
I saw her grandma coming to me, looking at me worried.
Grandma : Help her, she needs you.
Nothing. I couldn't talk, i couldn't walk… Like something hit me.
Lely : Bill – i heard Lely saying my name – Bill?
-I'm here – i came to Lely and took her hand.
Lely : I'm scared Sad

-Don't cry – i wiped away her tears.
Lely : I thought he's going to shoot me.
-Don't think about it anymore. It's over.
Lely : Bill…

She was just crying. I wish i could have helped her.
Lucas : Carry her to granny Nena's flat. I'll call the police.
Grandma : Come here sweety – she carefully said to Lely.
I took Lely into my hands and we went to her grandma's flat.

*In a flat*

Lely was in a bedroom. She finally fell asleep.
I went to the livingroom where were Lucas, grandma and a police officer.
Lucas : No, she fell and her leg hurt. I left her on a bench and went for her grandma. When we came she was crying & lying on a bench. Everything around was covered in blood. That's when we saw that guy… dead.
An officer : Do you know that guy?
Lucas : No – he waved his head and looked at grandma.
Grandma : No, i don't know him neither.
An officer : Actually, he was a psychopath. He ran out of the nuthouse. He was very dangerous.
-What's going to happen now?
I asked and everybody looked at me. They didn't see when i came.
Lucas : Hey man. How is she?
-She's hanging =/ She's asleep now.
Grandma : And what about you? – Lely's grandma came to me. I saw worry in her eyes.
-Yes, i'm ok.
Lucas : This sucks.
-Yeah…

#Lely talking#

Bill was by my side the whole time – wiping away my tears, whispering 'i'm here' in my ear, saying it's over…
But it has just started. Who could ever forget they saw a suicide? Nothing's over.
Like fear filled my life.
I was so glad he's with me, by my side. He made me feel safe.
But still, i closed my eyes and pretended i was sleeping.
Why? =/
He left the room after he saw me 'asleep'.
I opened my eyes.
-Save me with your love tonight… - i whispered through tears.

I was filled with the emotions, scenes, everything…!
Then i heard somebody coming into my room. I closed my eyes fastly, pretending i was sleeping.

Jelena : Good morning!!!!!
Hilal : Shh! You'll wake her up – she said while hushing Jelena.
Jelena : She's not sleeping.
Hilal : How do you know?
Jelena : We are like copies Very Happy

-That doesn't mean you can yell…
Jelena : See? ^^
I turned on the other side of the bed so i could see girls.
Hilal : Lely…

Jelena came to me and kissed me in a cheek.
-I love you too.
Jelena : Come Hilal, let's go now.
Hilal : Maybe we should stay with her and make her feel better.
Jelena : No. I think…
-Yeah, you should go. I just wanna be alone. Sorry.
Jelena : Just look at me as… A prettier version of Lely – she was talking while leaving a room with Hilal.
-Khm…
Jelena turned and laughed.
-I'm taking back my love.
Jelena : Razz

I knew they were all trying to make me feel better. But there was nothing to do about it. It was somehting between me & myself.
Besides, how could i possibly forget all that blood in front of my face.
This just isn't a fairytale with a happy end =/

#Bill talking#

After Jelena & Hilal left, i went to Lely. She was sitting on a bed. She was holding her face, like she was crying.
-Lely? – i came closer to her – what's wrong baby?
She looked up.
I sat next to her and put my hands round her shoulders – Are you ok?
Lely : Bill, how could i be ok? Just a few hours ago i saw a man killing himself. And then all that blood…
-I know, i'm sorry…

She really doesn't deserve this, it's unfair.
I wish i could help her somehow. She looked so miserable and scared and sad…

#Lely talking#

I don't know why was this happening. It's really unfair.
I looked into Bill's eyes.
-Just a few weeks ago everything was perfect. And then one little stupid thing happened and everythi-
He stopped me… with a kiss.
His lips touched mine. And on a second, i forgot about everything. He hugged me tight and pulled me closer to him.
It finally felt perfect after a long time.
In the end, our lips were slowly rambling.
-Please, don't let go… - i whispered fastly.

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Tue May 11, 2010 8:46 pm

Oh...Lely this is really sad.... Sad

The story is full of emotions...
It's so incredible....<33
Love you Baby...:**
post soon!!! <33 Wink

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Tue May 11, 2010 8:49 pm

awww thanks so much *-*
i love you even more!!!
<3<3

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Tue May 11, 2010 9:11 pm

aaaaa....you know how much I love you?!?!? Razz

and you know you can't beat me in telling me how much you love me....cuz i always love you more!!! Razz

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Tue May 11, 2010 9:15 pm

I will read them lely but i really dont know when , sorry sissy <3 You know im so busy and I guess these are Awesome chapters (=

Love you <3

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Tue May 11, 2010 9:47 pm

awww,

Lely is in a shock Shocked

& bill is by her side <33
Awesome chapterr ^^

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Tue May 11, 2010 11:46 pm

awwww!!!!! amazing chapter!!! XD

keep it up!!!

I'm relieved now...hehe I was scared before u posted it!! xD

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Wed May 12, 2010 6:54 am

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Wed May 12, 2010 2:32 pm

ehehehe

well thanks girls once again ^^ <3

@Jelena : Lol i know <.< but still, i llove youu!!! <3
@Hilal : it's ok sis Wink

<3

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Wed May 12, 2010 10:46 pm

<333 I love you right back sissy....<333

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