Be my Angel of Death ~

Subject: Re: Be my Angel of Death ~ Tue Apr 20, 2010 3:44 pm

I tried to wrote romantic
thank you guys <3

Subject: Re: Be my Angel of Death ~ Tue Apr 20, 2010 4:17 pm

When will be the next chapter??? I'm so excited about it!

Subject: Re: Be my Angel of Death ~ Tue Apr 20, 2010 4:33 pm

awww nice chapter sis Wink

i like it <3
can't wait for a new one

Subject: Re: Be my Angel of Death ~ Tue Apr 20, 2010 5:26 pm

Tonight i will put new chapter xenia
Omg! really you like it?
im glad <3
thank you sis <3
Love ya <3

Subject: Re: Be my Angel of Death ~ Tue Apr 20, 2010 5:32 pm

hmm .. no, i don't like it ;P
i love it Very Happy

and love you even more <3

Subject: Re: Be my Angel of Death ~ Tue Apr 20, 2010 5:45 pm

xaxaxax..... Very Happy

Subject: Re: Be my Angel of Death ~ Tue Apr 20, 2010 5:50 pm

omG! lely! you make me scared!
I love you more more more and more hih

Subject: Re: Be my Angel of Death ~ Tue Apr 20, 2010 6:55 pm

haha i'm sowwy <3
L-O-V-E Very Happy

(is not what this was .. talala .. haha i'm singing now Razz

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<3

Subject: Re: Be my Angel of Death ~ Tue Apr 20, 2010 7:55 pm

the chapter is freaking awsome,i loved it Very Happy

Subject: Re: Be my Angel of Death ~ Tue Apr 20, 2010 8:46 pm

Thank you <3 ~
here is new chapter i hope you like it ^^

and i can feel her lips ...
and ..She kissed me , I feel like im in heaven!!
and she is an angel ^^
maybe im a killer :/
Yes it's me! i must kill her :/ maybe i can .. but i cant! i really cant ...
i love her so much...

Bill , this is your time!
Come on!
i whispered in her ear " I love you "
She just stopped ...
and looked at my eyes ...
My heart can stop!

i just want you joanna in my life ... please just say magical words for me! please just say 'I love you too' but i guess you dont love me ...
but im stupid i keep loving you ...

Love! = stupid thing!!

She’s still looking at my eyes and stood up and started to run!
god! i want to die!
what did I do?!!

maybe maybe now she , ahh grh!
maybe she doesnt want to be my friend anymore...
she doesnt want to be my girlfriend!
she doesnt want anything from me!!

im going insane!
tom looked at me like " Are you okey? "

* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

Im at the beach..
Nobody’s here ...
just me ..
alone ..
and missing side ... missing my SIDE!

She really doesnt love me ...
Bill you must understand this!
understand

*phone ringing

WTF!
Leave me alone who are you?!!
f*ck off!

i threw my phone into sea ...

#Anna

-Hilal am i stupid? why am i not saying anything?!! and now he didnt answer me ... i broke his heart?!
Hilal - i think you are just confused ?
- But , you know I love him so much!
Hilal - Yeaa i know but :/
- Whatever i feel so bad! i want to kill myself!
Hilal - promise me! dont do this!
- promise ... i will wait for bill so i die ..
Hilal - And please stop crying ...
- i will try ...
Hilal - bye bye ^^ love ya
- bye , me too
Hilal - Jelena where are you sweetie?

She went with jelena to her home ..
huh! i dont want to sleep...
i dont want anything!!
i just want bill
Im really stupid why i did this ?!!
why?!!

#3 hours passed!

Still i dont want to sleep!
but i closed my eyes ... I tried to see bill's perfect face and i heard some noise ...
When i opened my eyes!
Bill?

- Bill?
I know i mean i think i broke his heart! because he doesnt answer me...
- Bill ... I-
Bill - shh ...
- But-
he put his hand on my lips...
Bill - Sorry .. Im really sorry , just forget what i said forget these stupid words!
- I cant ...
Bill - Why? You like to see me in pain?!
- No .. I -
Bill - I just want you to forget them and i have one question for you!
- But bil-
he never listens to me!!
Bill - Are you ready for death?!
- Bill stop i-
bill - just answer like " yes " or " no "
- bill Stop it and listen to me! I LOVE YOU TOO!

to be countined! ~

Subject: Re: Be my Angel of Death ~ Tue Apr 20, 2010 8:53 pm

OMG-.
I'm so excited.. xD
Greaatt Chapterr~!
Keep it up ^_^

Subject: Re: Be my Angel of Death ~ Tue Apr 20, 2010 8:57 pm

Thank you <3

Subject: Re: Be my Angel of Death ~ Tue Apr 20, 2010 8:58 pm

Omg......Beautiful....<333
and sis I LOVE YOU!!! <333
omg...please don't finish this story yet....make a 10000000000 chapters...I'll never get tired of reading your story...I just love It....and I'm in love with it....<333
gr8 chapter as always...And ofc I love it...<33
So sweet and romantic when Bill whispered in her ear " I love you " ...<33
GREATEST STORY EVER!!!
YOU MUST WRITE A BOOK...
AND WHEN YOU PUT IT ON SALE...THE GUYS WILL READ IT...AND THEY'LL COME TO YOU....
AND TOM WILL SAY I LOVE YOU....
I JUST KNOW IT...
THE WORD MUST KNOW FOR THIS STORY!!!
Love ya 4-ever!!!!!!!

Subject: Re: Be my Angel of Death ~ Tue Apr 20, 2010 9:33 pm

Thank you sissy <3
i love you forever too <3
be my SISTER FOREVER <3
Thanks for your AWESOME comment! <3
And I really dont know maybe i can finish this story or i can start to everything now ^^

Subject: Re: Be my Angel of Death ~ Tue Apr 20, 2010 9:57 pm

Don't finish it....It's awesome....I really like it!!! :*

Subject: Re: Be my Angel of Death ~ Tue Apr 20, 2010 10:36 pm

what can i say, thats sooo sweeet

Subject: Re: Be my Angel of Death ~ Wed Apr 21, 2010 2:17 am

Oh god awesome chapter as usual
Keep it up and NEVER end this story I really love it!! I love you

Subject: Re: Be my Angel of Death ~ Wed Apr 21, 2010 1:10 pm

awww this is nice Smile

<3

Subject: Re: Be my Angel of Death ~ Wed Apr 21, 2010 5:18 pm

Thank you guys im really glad you all like it ^^

enjoy ~

Chapter 20 :

Bill - Are you ready for death?!
- Bill stop i-
Bill - just answer like " yes " or " no "
- bill Stop it and listen to me! I LOVE YOU TOO!

we are just looking at each other's eyes ...
Bill - Can i believe it now?
he went away ... and started crying
- Bill Stop please ...
Bill - How can i believe it anna tell me?! how?
- i know i did so many mistakes but i understood , i love you .... so much
Bill - Why you didnt say this when i told you " I love you " Why?!!
- Im confused , bill sorry , can you forget my mistakes?

#Bill

why did you wait anna why?
I dont want to hurt you .. but we cant , this impossible! those are not your mistakes everything is my mistake! ... I did everything, when i told you " i love you " ...
I love you so much ... and i must save your life sorry i will hurt you sorry angel

- I cant forget Anna
Anna - But Bi--
- Can you forget something for me?
Anna - I can do everything for you
- Forget me!
She just look at me ... and i see tears on her pretty green eyes ...
Anna - okey you must do a favor for me! kill me NOW! im ready

What can i say?!
god! please help me im not ready to do this ...
i still love her ... as always
I will love her forever ...

Anna - Why are you still waiting?!!!
- okey close your eyes ...
she closed her eyes and i got close to her
I dont know what can i do?
i just know i cant kill her ...

I hate myself!
I broke her heart

#Anna

I can feel his breath...
I wonder if I will feel pain?
but i dont care ...
now i dont care about anything!!

but what?
im in a dream?
I feel his lips on my lips!
I think again I’m seeing a dream
or i died and now im in heaven?
How can he do this ... few min. ago i felt like i hate him but now i know i love him! I will love him forever ...
But i can feel him break my heart again...
Now everything is amazing
but ... it's not staying so long ...

To be countinued! ~

Subject: Re: Be my Angel of Death ~ Wed Apr 21, 2010 6:13 pm

aww he kissed her :')
Nice chapter (Y)
Keep it up ^_^

Subject: Re: Be my Angel of Death ~ Wed Apr 21, 2010 6:23 pm

awww *-* i don't know what would i do if Bill actually asks me to forget him? Neutral

btw nice chapter sis Very Happy

i like it

<3

Subject: Re: Be my Angel of Death ~ Wed Apr 21, 2010 7:23 pm

And here is last chapter (:
thanks for all my readers <3 i hope you like my story (:

Chapter 21 :

Im feel his lips on my lips!
I think again I’m seeing dream
or i died and now im in heaven?
How can he do this ... few min. ago i felt like i hate him but now i know i love him! I will love him forever ...
But i can feel him break my heart again...
Now everything is amazing
but ... it's not staying so long ...

I opened my eyes ... and he look at me so sweetly ...
Bill - Can we start everything again?
- Yes
Bill - Hi , Im bill what's your name pretty girl?
- Im joanna but you can call me "anna"
Bill – a pretty name for a pretty girl ^^ ... mmm Anna <3
- nice to meet you billie <3
Bill - billie? ahaha sweet name nice to meet you too ^^
- eeheh yess billie , my billie ...
Bill - im forever yours ...
- I love you ...
Bill - I love you too ... wait i have something for you ...
- okey ...

#Anna

When he came back , he took my hand and we went to outside ...
Bill - Now are you ready?!
- Yes ...
Bill - Huh! ( he scream ) I LOVE YOU SO MUCH ANNA!! HEY EVERYBODY LOOK AT HERE!! I LOVE THIS GIRL SO MUCH!!
- Bill what are you doing? (blushing )
now everybody looked at bill And bill is still screamong

Tom - Bill ? Khm bro are you okey?
Bill started jumping and saying - she loves me she loves me
Tom - I dont like this but i must say something to you ...
Bill - What's wrong?
Tom - you are a grim reaper bill!!! you forgot your work? you must do something!
Bill - Ahahahah no i musnt!
Tom - How ... ?
Bill - Ahh Tom! This is real love... God cant do anything against this!!

- Bill ...
Bill - yes darling <3
- Can you promise me , we will love each other forever?
Bill - Forever ^^
he get closer again ...
and his lips find anna's lips ...

Bill ;
Now he is so happy! he found his real love and Anna loves him too , he just wished to get married to her and have childeren
Joanna ;
She now cant believe everything she needs time maybe she can believe And she loves billie she loves billie
Jelena ;
She’s still bill's best friend , And so happy for bill & Anna ... but still she cant find her soulmate ...
Tom ;
He is really so so so happy for his twin ^^ because he know anna perfect girl for bill
Hilal ;
She now really believes in miracles! and so happy ...

~ The end ~

Subject: Re: Be my Angel of Death ~ Wed Apr 21, 2010 7:30 pm

Aww.. <333

- Can you promise me , we will love each other forever?
Bill - Forever ^^

Great storyy :3 king

Subject: Re: Be my Angel of Death ~ Wed Apr 21, 2010 10:07 pm

aww....
I just don't have words for this story...
not even a milion words can't describe this story...
Omg....sis when I was reading the last chapter...a tear from my eye fell down...
I don't know what to say....It's too amazing.......
*I'M SPEACHLESS!!!!!!!*
please make another story....please....
please....please........9999999999999999999999999999999 times please.......
I love your stories....as much as I love you.....
And you know how much I love you!??! <333
More than this world...<333
<333 LOVE YA!!! <333
ALWAYS BFF...AND MORE THAN THAT...SISTERS!!!:

Be my Angel of Death ~ - Page 7 Always10

Subject: Re: Be my Angel of Death ~ Wed Apr 21, 2010 10:49 pm

omg it's the end,i just wished if there were more and more chapters,cuz the story is really great

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