*Try to see world through my eyes

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Thu Apr 22, 2010 10:36 pm

A kaulitz kiss, it must be the sweetest kiss in the world <3

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Fri Apr 23, 2010 3:24 am

I agree, it must feel like heaven ^^ Razz

Great chapter i totally loved it!! <3

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Fri Apr 23, 2010 5:47 am

AWW <33 That part makes my heart really pound!!! Razz

. Umm... Great chapter Lely! Keep it up!

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Fri Apr 23, 2010 12:05 pm

awwww <33
he kissed her on the cheek :O
nice chapter Very Happy

Keep it up ^_^

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Fri Apr 23, 2010 1:04 pm

@Hilal : awww wahey! ^^
haha eh, Tom Suspect

and thanks btw Very Happy

@Jelena : awww thank you sis Very Happy

<3
umm Lucas ... he's just a character and i named him like that 'cause i love that name Razz

hehe oky ^^ i love you <3

@Safiita : hehe i bet it is Very Happy

<3

@Cofie : Lol yeah Very Happy

aww and thanks :* <3

@Xenia : haha Very Happy

thank you so much ^^ <3

@Aaesha : hehe yup *-* thanx <3

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Fri Apr 23, 2010 1:25 pm

You're welcome <33

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Fri Apr 23, 2010 1:35 pm

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Fri Apr 23, 2010 1:52 pm

Where is new chapter?

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Fri Apr 23, 2010 2:03 pm

umm i didn't start it yet Neutral

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Fri Apr 23, 2010 2:17 pm

OMG!
I will kill you now! start it now pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Fri Apr 23, 2010 2:21 pm

haha ok ok, i'm writing Razz

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Fri Apr 23, 2010 2:30 pm

yayy! alalalalalallalla

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Fri Apr 23, 2010 2:30 pm

i still didn't start Razz

but i am starting now xD

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Fri Apr 23, 2010 2:46 pm

O-M-G!
I really will kill you!

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Fri Apr 23, 2010 3:14 pm

haha then there won't be a new chapter at all Razz

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Fri Apr 23, 2010 4:09 pm

~ 11TH CHAPTER ~

*next day*

I was on my way to school. Again, i was alone, i called Jelena and told her i'll be late a few minutes. I needed to think about what happened yesterday. I mean, nothing bad happened, but … my mind was confused and my head was in the heaven. There's no way today i'd act normaly
Bill! Bill .. Bill … i wanna talk to him.
Of course, everytime i'm trying to be alone and think about something, somebody interrupts me. It was also like that this time, somebody was running behind me, calling my name. I turned and saw Hilal, that new girl, running to me.

Hilal : Lely!
- Hi – i turned and waited for her – why are you running?
Hilal : 'cause i'll be late for school, Again!
- Hehe happens to me all the time Razz

Hilal : So why aren't you with Lucas & Jelena?
- I don't know, i wanted to be alone, you know, one of those times when everything's mixed in your head and you gotta figure it out.
Hilal : Yeah, i get it. Oh, if you want, i can go. If you wanna be alone.
- No, no, it's ok. Maybe i've been thinking to much. I need somebody new in my life Very Happy

Hilal : Oky ^^

We were walking to school together. It was nice. She is very honest and kind. I think i can trust her Smile

Hilal : So do you have a boyfriend?
- Nope.
Hilal : Aren't you with Tom's brother?
- What?
Hilal : Yeah, Tom told me something. He thinks you like his brother and Bill likes you …

WHAT DID SHE JUST SAY?!

- Khm, what did Tom say? – i stopped and looked at Hilal confusedly.
Hilal : Yes, that B - ..

Hilal : Did i say something wrong?

Hilal : Lely?

I started running .. to my special place, that park behind my building. I knew i will find Bill there. I don't know why i was acting like this.
Suddenly i bumped into somebody.

Bill : Lely! – he holded me 'cause i almost fell – are you ok? O.o
- Bill! – i just said his name without even thinking.
Bill : Yes? Very Happy

- Oh, i'm sorry. Are You ok?
Bill : Yes, i'm fine Smile

why were you running? Don't you have school?
- Emm, today i … have school later Wink

Bill : Aha. Cool Very Happy

- So what are you doing?
Bill : In the park?
- ... behind my building Razz

Bill : Haha i don't know. I guess this also became a place for me where i can just chill and think about some things in my life.
- Like? .. Oh, of course if i can know what about you're thinking.

#Bill talking#

I wanted to say 'i'm thinking about you', but that would be wrong. We all know she could never be mine. I don't want her to feel preasure.

- I'm just thinking about some things that happened to me in last few months.
Lely : Nice. Anything good happened?
- Of course. For an example – you Smile

i found a new friend.
Lely : Aww Very Happy

#Lely talking#

A new friend? This is so stupid. Bill, i wish you would know what i feel about you!
I wanted to kiss him and show him the truth inside of me.

-Umm .. so ..-he stopped me.

Actually, his lips stopped me. He kissed me O.O
I could have feel his soft lips on mine. He got closer to me and hugged me. We were sitting on a bench and … he actually kissed me :')
A few seconds later he stopped. His lips were slowly rambling from mine. His hug was relenting. My eyes were still closed.
I wanted to say 'Please, don't let me go'.
I was still sitting motionless.
Bill, i can't walk, i can't talk, i can't breathe. You stole my heart!

Bill : Lely, i am sorry if t-

I put my finger on his lips.

- Don't. Just don't talk.
Bill : Bu-
- Don't – my eyes were still closed.

I think i could have still feel his lips on mine, his touch.
Hilal told me the truth, i guess Bill …

' Wake up!!! Lely! Lely! ' – somebody hit me in a leg : ' Time to wake up! '
- No! Sad

I opened my eyes and .. saw Lucas standing next to me.

Lucas : Hey Very Happy

finally, you're awake.
- What?
Lucas : I came here to pick you up. School, remember?

No! It was just a dream. No! No! No! Sad

Bill, where are you?! I can't live like this anymore. I need you! Please, hear my call, save me Sad

Lucas : Come, Bill is waiting for us outside, he's going to school with us.

I can't do it anymore. Either i'll tell him or …
My heart will brake anyway.

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Fri Apr 23, 2010 4:29 pm

First me first me! OMG !!! THIS JUST DREAMM
Great chapter sissy <3
keep it up ~
Love ya <3

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Fri Apr 23, 2010 4:34 pm

awww <3 thank you sweety
i love you more! Very Happy

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Fri Apr 23, 2010 8:01 pm

poor girl :'(
Great chapter .. ^_^

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Fri Apr 23, 2010 10:53 pm

Oh god!! It was just a dream!!! Sad

I thought it was real, it was so beautiful I love you

I loved this chapter keep it up^^

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Fri Apr 23, 2010 11:29 pm

aww......
A dream!!! Razz

I wish that was real!!! Smile

I think that you wish that too!!! Very Happy

awesome and amazimg chapter....( hmm...nothing new there... Very Happy

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post new chapter soon...
Love ya sis <333 pusaaaaaaaaa......:**

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Sat Apr 24, 2010 2:31 pm

@Aaesha : aww yes :///
but thanks honey <3

@Cofie : awwwi thank you (:
yes, it would be awesome if it wasn't only a dream ;*
and ofc, thank you <3

@Jelena : ahaha you're laughing xD
LoL of course i wish that was for real, too *-*
hehe thanxxx :*
love you even more!<3

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Sat Apr 24, 2010 7:10 pm

LOve you more than this world!!! Very Happy

<33

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Sat Apr 24, 2010 7:12 pm

woohoo! i love you ... from the earth to the sky and back down ^^ <3

~ 12TH CHAPTER ~

It was only a dream.
It was only a dream.
It was only a dream …
What's happening with my life? What's happening with me? Everything turned around.
Bill, why do i want you? Why do i need you?
I wish it would be as easy as people say.

Lucas : Let's go! Bill's waiting.
- Bill ..
Lucas : Yes, Bill. You know him. That guy you looove.
Bill : What?
Lucas : What? – he turned and saw Bill standing in front of my room – why didn't you wait outside?
Bill : Umm .. Lely's mom invited me in. But what did you say?

First i looked at Bill and then at Lucas. Can i just barry myself right now? Ha? Dear earth …

Lucas : I will go now.
- Lucas!
Lucas : Yes?

I just looked at him like 'don't you dare leaving me'.
I think he got scared 'cause of my look and left anyway.
I was sitting in a bed, looking at Joshi who was next to me.

Bill : Lely …
I waved with my head.
Bill : Lely – he got closer.
I was still in my bed, in my pijama. This was silly.

- Umm i gotta change.
Bill : Aha. Yeah, i'll leave you.

He left the room. I was still looking at Joshi on my bed. This was complicated.
I wanted to hear a voice in my head saying 'wake up!'. Now i wanted this to be a dream.
Lucas, what did you do?!
I dressed up and took my bag. Lucas and Bill were waiting for me in livingroom.

Bill : I …
- Bye mom.
Lucas : Bye Miss Tomić.
Bill : Nice to meet you – he politely said to my mom.

I think she was still confused about his hair. I saw Bill wanted to talk about that what Lucas said, but i didn't want in front of my mom.

We were walking in the park now, going to school. I don't know why Lucas came to pick me up today.
I was walking in front of them.

Bill : Lely! Please stop.
Lucas : My feet hurt O.o
Bill : Lely! – he yelled and stopped.
- What? – i stopped and turned.
Bill : Are you .. crying?
- Rolling Eyes

Bill : Aww, Leely *-*

Lucas saw that we needed to talk privately so he just went without us.

Bill : What is going on here?
- Didn't you hear what Lucas said?
Bill : That you …
I crossed my arms and looked away.
He came to me.

Bill : Please, Lely, look me in the eyes … and tell me the truth – he wiped away my tears.

I closed my eyes. Again, his touch. And this isn't a dream.

Bill : Please, talk to me.
- Uff, don't you get it?
Bill : What?
- I tought i'll never love, care or need somebody like this.
Bill : What do you mean?
- Bill …

He turned my head so i could look into his eyes. I opened my eyes and saw him smiling at me.

- What? Why are you smiling?
Bill : Because … Very Happy

… - he started whispering in my ear – can i tell you a secret?
- O.k.
Bill : You know, there's one girl who makes my heart beat faster. And everytime i see her, i start smiling. Without her my life would be incomplete. With her by my side i can do anything. And if she would be mine, i'd never let her go 'cause now i'm sure i can't live without her. I don't care what people say, i know we were meant to be.

Then he moved away and looked at me.

Bill : Sweety, why are you crying again?
My tears just started falling – this was the most beautiful thing that anybody has ever told me.
Bill : How do you know i was talking about you? Very Happy

– he smiled.
- Hehe – i wiped my tears.
Bill : So, will you keep my secret?
Now i got closer to him and whispered in his ear – forever.

Subject: Re: *Try to see world through my eyes Sat Apr 24, 2010 7:26 pm

awwww .<333
That's soo sweeet :')
Great chapterr
Keep it up .^_^

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