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hallo again!! this is my new fan fic, as you may have noticed. it's a crazy twisted story that is NOT REAL!! it is a fiction of my imagination!! (i thought of it in school)

hope u like it!!
PS: it's the first time i write something with a type like this!!

Chapter 1: Lucretia

“Wooooo spell done spell do, cast on them one spell...voodoo...”
Said the girl all dressed in black, in her dark room lit by some red candles sitting here and there...

This girl’s name was Lucretia. She lived in the middle of nowhere. No one visited her, except for the delivery guy that never came in or saw her. Her only connection to the outside world was her little computer, which she used to surf websites of magical spells and music. Once she came across a band...tokio hotel. She liked the lead singer, bill Kaulitz. His gothic, androgynous style attracted her. She kept track of his actions and gradually fell in love with him.

One day, she came to a point where it was impossible to keep going without this guy. She searched for a spell in her spell book to find out where he was. On her map, she closed her eyes and took a red needle, and let her hand point to the singer’s location. She then looked at the map and found out where he was and for the first time in ages, she went outside her house. She bought a ticket to Germany and took off the same day with only her bag on her back.

She then grabbed a map of Berlin and she used her needle again... then she went to the location the needle pointed to.

She got to the exact place. It was an apartment building. She walked towards it slowly. There was, in the entrance, some mailboxes. She saw the one where it was written: bill and tom kaulitz. Then, she knew she had reached her destination.

She checked in the hotel next to that street and went up to her room. When she got there, she started right away transforming the room into her own paranormal world. She knew she needed a way to get into the twins’ life. She wrote a letter she would use to make them find her.

In the middle of the night, she sneaked out of the hotel and put it in their mailbox...





plz tell me what you think!!
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PostSubject: Re: **SpEllS...**   **SpEllS...** EmptyThu May 01, 2008 6:10 pm

hey woooooooooooow niiice start i rly like it, plz don't be too late to post the next parts of it!! I love you Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: **SpEllS...**   **SpEllS...** EmptyThu May 01, 2008 6:34 pm

it'll be soon!! thx freiheit20!! Very Happy I love you
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PostSubject: Re: **SpEllS...**   **SpEllS...** EmptyThu May 01, 2008 7:00 pm

u're welc anytime!!keep the gd work!! I love you Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: **SpEllS...**   **SpEllS...** EmptyThu May 01, 2008 7:52 pm

WAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWW
THATS GR88888888888888888!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: **SpEllS...**   **SpEllS...** EmptyThu May 01, 2008 8:01 pm

waouh it's really goooood i love it xD
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PostSubject: Re: **SpEllS...**   **SpEllS...** EmptyThu May 01, 2008 8:13 pm

Exciting! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: **SpEllS...**   **SpEllS...** EmptyThu May 01, 2008 9:55 pm

just gr8 !!!! nice idea!
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PostSubject: Re: **SpEllS...**   **SpEllS...** EmptyFri May 02, 2008 8:59 pm

HEY MRD, I TOTALLY FELL IN LOVE WITH THIS ONE, IT SOUNDS REALLY GR8!! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE REST OF IT!! PLZZZZ WORK ON IT, CAUSE M SURE IT'LL BE SO FREAKING GR8!! CARRY ON, U R DOING A GR8 JOB!!
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WOWWWW!! awsommeee ....great start...voodoo..ahha Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: **SpEllS...**   **SpEllS...** EmptyMon May 05, 2008 4:54 pm

Chapter 2: the mail

The next morning:
Bill: tom did u get the mail? It’s your turn today!
Tom: I didn’t get it yet. I’ll do it when we get back from the studio.

Later that day:
Bill: would you go get the mail! Maybe there is something important!
Tom: I’m going! You worry too much!
Bill: Hurry! I have a weird feeling...
Tom: please stop imagining!
Bill: I would if you would just GET THE MAIL!
Tom: okay! okay! STOP SCREAMING!

Tom goes down to get it.

Tom (throwing the mail on the table in front of bill): are you happy now! Here’s your beloved mail!
Bill: HA HA! So funny!

Bill opens the mail and he sees the black envelope.

Bill: see I told you I had a weird feeling! Look at this!
Tom: what the hell is this? Do the letter people send black envelopes without addresses?
Bill: I don’t know... but I have a feeling this doesn’t come from a normal mail man...
Tom: great! Another feeling!
Bill: no, really...
Tom: open it and let’s see what’s inside!
Bill: okay.

Bill opens the letter written on black paper with a red pen, and reads aloud:
“You can find in the bottom of your dreams, a corpse hidden from your seams.
Streets away from this place you’ll find it. Traveled space for you. Her heart crawls to meet you.
From the love...
Bill...Find me...”

Tom: ...I got chills up my spine!
Bill: same here... but I’m intrigued...
Tom: I’m not! I think you have a crazy fan...
Bill: I don’t know what to do...
Tom: let me tell you...CALL THE POLICE!
Bill: no! it’s not the right thing to do! We have to find her!
Tom: WE??? No no... YOU!!
Bill: no tom! You’re going with me!
Tom: no way!! Keep dreaming man!
Bill: tom! I want to know who that girl is! Let’s see where she is and go find her tonight! We don’t have to wake up early tomorrow!
Tom: look I’ll do it on one condition...
Bill: what?
Tom: if she’s even a bit insane or capable of hurting herself or us, we’ll call the police!
Bill: okay! Now let’s figure out where she is!
Tom: how are you gonna do that?
Bill: from the letter... there’s a very clear code “streets away from this place you’ll find it”. Obviously she’s the corpse, and “this place” is where I live, which is here!
Tom: okay but where is the “streets away”?
Bill: where would any “traveled space” person be?
Tom: if you mean traveler, then it’s in a hotel.
Bill: and what do we have streets away from here?
Tom: A HOTEL!
Bill(sarcastically): good job! So you understand now?
Tom: yep! And stop making fun of me! If I was interested, I would have understood by myself!
Bill: if you say so...
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PostSubject: Re: **SpEllS...**   **SpEllS...** EmptyMon May 05, 2008 5:12 pm

hehehe wooooooooooooooooooooow rly it's awesooooooooooooome! luv it luv it luv it.... Very Happy plz plz don't be late to post the next chapter i'm soooo excited i wanna know what's gonna happen'!!! Very Happy gd job "mrd"!!keep it up!! I love you
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PostSubject: Re: **SpEllS...**   **SpEllS...** EmptyMon May 05, 2008 5:35 pm

thx i'll post the next part later Smile Wink
thx again!!! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: **SpEllS...**   **SpEllS...** EmptyMon May 05, 2008 6:59 pm

wow amazing
hahahahaahha
tom is so ccuteee =P LMAOO ..
GREAT story..AMAZINGGGGGGGGGGGGG!
plz dt be latee 2 postttt =D
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i just love the idea!!
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PostSubject: Re: **SpEllS...**   **SpEllS...** EmptyWed May 07, 2008 3:04 pm

LOVEE ITT!! soo interestinngg!! i'm like.....plz don 't end plzz don't endd!! hehe Razz...
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PostSubject: Re: **SpEllS...**   **SpEllS...** EmptyFri May 09, 2008 5:57 pm

lol i promise i'll try my best to post tomorrow!! btw i finished all the chapters of the story!! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: **SpEllS...**   **SpEllS...** EmptyFri May 09, 2008 11:17 pm

oh rly wooooooooow awesome that's so fast!!! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: **SpEllS...**   **SpEllS...** EmptySat May 10, 2008 6:20 pm

i don't like to take a lot of time to write my fan fic! i have now anotherreally cool fanfic almost done but i dont know how to end it so i've been stuck on it since the summer!!!

just 1 more thing, i'm so so so sorry but i can't post a new chapter today coz i dn't have my usb with me! so next time i'm gonna post it's gonna be 2 chapters! (maybe monday) Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: **SpEllS...**   **SpEllS...** EmptySat May 10, 2008 6:51 pm

omg are you making us wait on purpose?????!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lol just kidding
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PostSubject: Re: **SpEllS...**   **SpEllS...** EmptySat May 10, 2008 8:06 pm

sora don't be sad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SMILE Very Happy
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so sorry guys!! but everytime i'm online i happen to be sitting on a broken computer or not have my USB with me!! but now i have my usb and i'm sitting on a good pc! so here it is!

Chapter 3: behind doors

Then the twins grabbed their coats and got into tom’s car. He drove straight to the hotel. They were about to go to the reception desk when they remembered that they don’t know what to ask! They didn’t know her name or what she looked like! They weren’t even sure she was there!

Tom: now what?
Bill: I don’t know...
Tom: by the way, how did she find out where we live?
Bill: I don’t know that either...
(Seconds of silence, then Smile
Bill: look I have an idea! Why don’t we go into the hotel and check in, and then when we get inside we’ll search the hotel!
Tom: it seems like a good idea...anyways, that’s the only possible way to find out who this girl is... so, okay!

They checked in the hotel. They started then their search but no one was answering the door to them.

Bill: we have to make them open the door!
Tom: I’m not breaking any doors!
Bill: we won’t break anything! We’ll dress up like the guys from the room service!
Tom: this has gone too far! I am NOT gonna wear like a maid!
Bill: shut up! It’s not time for you to start being self-centered!
Tom: I’m NOT self-centered!

After convincing tom to do it, they sneaked into the closet and got a couple of uniforms. The brothers then started knocking on doors. 1st floor, 2nd floor, 3rd floor...room384...

Tom: do you smell something?
Bill: yeah...like incense...
Tom: yep, it’s coming from this room... but we can’t knock coz there is a no disturb sign...
Bill: let’s try...(knocks) ROOM SERVICE!
Voice from inside: NO YOU’RE NOT!
Bill: huh, what do you mean?
Voice from inside: I mean, you are not room service...
Bill: Is that you?
Voice from inside: yes bill! It is me!
Bill: can you open the door?
Voice from inside: no! Not now!
Bill: why?
Voice from inside: I can’t tell you... but we can meet somewhere tonight...
Bill: it’s already dark.
Voice from inside: at midnight... meet me in this room... the door will be open... just enter without knocking... ALONE!
Bill: okay... just tell me before I go, what do you want?
Voice from inside: isn’t it clear?! I WANT YOU!

Meanwhile, tom was listening in amazement standing next to bill! Then bill joined him and they both went to their room...

Tom: OMG she’s so weird!
Bill: should I meet her?
Tom: I can see that she wants only you! not ME!! OMG how can anyone not want me!!! She’s obviously blind or smthn!! Anyways, I don’t know... she scares me! Maybe she’ll hurt you... what are you gonna do?
Bill: mmm... I have time to think...
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and another chapter for the long long wait... (sorry again!) Smile

Chapter4: the meet...or not...

Meanwhile, Lucretia was in her room preparing for bill’s visit. Some potions, elixirs and some spells were prepared to make that night unforgettable! When everything was ready, it was almost midnight, so she sat and waited...

(In tom and bill’s room: )

Tom: I really don’t want you to go meet her!
Bill: I can look out for myself!
Tom: no! maybe she’s completely insane!
Bill: please tom! Don’t start playing the role of the big brother!
Tom: oh yeah! You reminded me! I’m YOUR BIG BROTHER AND I FORBID YOU TO GO!
Bil: no no! YOU FORBID! No tom! You can’t do that! I think I’m an adult and I do whatever I want!
Tom: look, you do what you want and when you come back to me crying coz the mean lady hurt you, I will tell you one thing: I TOLD YOU SO!
Bill: ok then! We’ll see!!

Bill heads to the room thinking of the conversation he just had with tom, and starts to review his decision:
What should I do?
Then tom appears again and calls bill from the opposite side of the hallway where he was standing:

Tom: don’t do it! Please!
Bill: I don’t know what I should do!
Tom: just don’t make your curiosity lead you to something bigger and more dangerous!
Bill: like what?
Tom: who knows? This girl wouldn’t even show her face!
Bill: you’re right... I want to know who she is but I’m afraid...
Tom: just don’t go... I now have a really bad feeling about this whole thing!

Tom gets closer to bill and holds his shoulder and walks him away from the door...
This conversation was heard by Lucretia... she couldn’t believe what tom did, and how easy bill was!! She was very angry with both of them! She grabbed her spell book immediately and started to search for curses... because of the twins’ life, it was so easy to hurt them... so she did...

(credits to Christine, my friend, for giving me the idea for this chapter)
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omg im like O.O
Very Happy i love this fan fic cos it's different from all the others keep writing this fiction!!
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