**SpEllS...**

thx !! <3

omg i love it !!!!! rly it is different from all the others! but now i'm scraed for bill and tom!! nooooooooo u eeeeeeevil lucretia!! u won't touch them!!! over my dead body!!! they will get out of it i'm sure? no? u wanna bet ? okay ....

LOL maybe she'll hurt them and maybe she won't... u just have to keep tuning in for the rest of the story!!!

SOOO misterious!! luvvvvv ittt!! and yeah it's different !! like ittttt! GREAT JOB!! but beware Dayana's here...ur Lucretia will be dead , before she touchs the twinss !!

hehehe!! thank u for the good comments u guys!!

lol hell ya ! i'm like that huge security guy when it comes to protecting the twins!!!!

hehe cool!!

Tom: I can see that she wants only you! not ME!! OMG how can anyone not want me!!! She’s obviously blind or smthn!! Anyways, I don’t know... she scares me! Maybe she’ll hurt you... what are you gonna do?


HAHAHAHAHAHHAHA
SO TRUE
LMFAO
I THINK SHES BLIND =P
GREATTT STORYYYY
ITSS SOOOO COOL
KEEP IT UP =D
♥

haha!! i thought u'd like that sora!! lol!!

and now a new chapter!! i know it's short, sorry but i wanna keep the suspence!! lol ...

Chapter 5: strike 1...

The next morning, bill and tom checked out of the hotel. They headed to their house. On the road, there were so many fire trucks and ambulances. They waited and then minutes later, they passed to see that all these were parked in front of their building. They then looked at the apartment, and saw smoke coming out of the windows. They couldn’t believe their eyes! Lucky them for staying outside of the house, but unlucky for their neighbor... he stayed trapped inside the floor and suffered from many burns and lied in the hospital, but his poor small dog didn’t survive...No one really knew why the fire happened, and why it was so big!
Bill and tom moved to their favorite hotel in Berlin. Not the one the girl was in. they visited the guy in the hospital and paid for everything: hospital, material damages, anew dog,... The boys were so busy that they couldn’t even talk on the phone with Georg and gustav!

hmm i wonder who started the fire hmm...
......
damn it i just can't figure it out

hehe don't worry...
i won't be able to post before next week, i think.
so i'll post 2 other parts just for you!!

Chapter 6: strike 2 ...

They couldn’t stay in berlin more than two days coz they had a concert in another city.

Georg: what happened? We heard the news...
Bill: we don’t know exactly, but the fire fighters said that they found a red candle that they think started the fire, but I don’t remember having a red candle at home...
Gustav: good thing you didn’t get hurt!
Bill: I know! We were at a hotel...
Gustav: but what made you go to a hotel?
Tom: bill got a letter from a fan that wanted to meet him at midnight and then he backed out of it and stuff like that...
Georg: ok, but why did he back out of it?
Bill: she seemed dangerous! I mean she wouldn’t show her face! And her letter was black and red and I smelled some weird stuff coming out of that room!
Georg: but don’t you usually like these stuff?
Bill: I’m curious about them... but this time both me and tom had weird feelings about this whole thing...
Gustav: all I know is that your story is so weird! And you guys have no idea how much fanmail you got these 2 days!
Bill: good! I need some support right now!

The boys then started the concert that night.
“turn around I am here, if you want it’s me you’ll see...” then he was looking through the crowd and his eyes crossed a girl’s... she looks back... bill freezes... it’s like he was hypnotized... then for a second only his lips moved...
“doesn’t matter, far or near, I can hold you when you reach for me...” and he stopped...
The music was still going. Tom noticed what was happening, so he grabbed the mic from his brother’s frozen hand and pushed him to the security guys who carried him off the stage; and he continues to sing the song instead of bill.
Then when the song ended the 3 boys on stage rushed backstage to find an unconscious bill lying on the couch with people surrounding him...

Tom: BILL! *to the ppl around* What’s wrong with him!

And he starts slapping his brother hoping he would open his eyes. Then he looks up and asks the paramedics what’s happening. No one answers. they just nod their heads showing the horrified twin that they have absolutely no idea what’s going on with his brother! Then 3 seconds later, bill starts to regain conscious:

Tom: bill! What happened?
Bill: I...don’t...remember...
Tom: I saw you looking at this girl, who is she?
Bill: I have no idea...
Tom: what does she look like?
Bill: now I don’t remember her face... just the effect she had on me...
Tom: but now you’re fine, right?
Bill: yeah... I’m ok... but I think we have to cancel tomorrow’s concert...
Tom: let’s not do that now... maybe tomorrow you’ll get better... go to the hotel now, and get a good night’s sleep...

Chapter7: strike 3 and the realize...

The band gathered in the hotel’s hall the next morning. Bill was feeling good, so they kept everything as usual... the concert came.
“Now we’ll do a song tom likes a lot: REDEN”
Gustav shakes his drumsticks for the band to prepare the beginning of the song. So, as usual, tom was sending flirtatious looks all over the crowd, when his eyes crossed a girl’s. He froze just like his brother the other day. The drums, the bass and the singer start the song...but the guitar doesn’t.
No one could believe this, then:

Bill: so sorry guys but it seems we have a problem...take a second to relax...and we’ll be back!

The crowd went in total shock! The band rushed to the back and tried to figure out what’s wrong. Tom lost conscious...then he woke up...

Bill: what?? What happened?
Tom: OH god! The same thing that happened to you!!
Bill: Who is she?
Tom: maybe it’s that girl of the other day! All the issues started when we met her!
Bill: maybe she’s mad at us because I never showed up!
Tom: why would she be mad at me?
Bill: you convinced me, right?
Tom: oh...
Georg: what does that mean?? You’re cursed??
Tom: I guess so...
Gustav: you have to go talk to her!
Tom: I know, but we can’t do it alone... you guys have to come with us!
Georg: ok I don’t mind...
Gustav: me neither...

i love the story!!!!!! gr8 idea!! keep it up and don't be too late to post plz

wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow awesome amazin' well all the other fanfic stories r gr8 but this one is rly my favorite i like the style: how u wrote it! maybe coz i like horror, smth like that, it's full of suspense and that's COOL! 10x :D:D
can't wait to read the next part of it! and i hope u'll write another one in this style! wa333 i'm soooo excited i need to calm down hehe sry it's my turn to have my moment

omggggggggg
amazingggggggggg storrrry :DD:D:D
soooooooo cool

AAAAAAAAHHH!! LOVE LOVE LOVE ITT!! u are sooooooo good at this.....OMG the fic is like INCREDIBLE...and all this mystery and suspense like Grace said! AWSOME JOB!!!

OMG guys!!! thx a lot for all your comments!! i'm so happy!!!
i couldn't post before, i was very sick and i couldn't get out of the house
but now i'm kinda better, so here's a new part


Chapter 8: searching...

The band had no choice but to cancel their next concert. Bill and tom had no place to go since their house burnt down, so they stayed with gustav and georg in their hotel. Then when the morning came, the four friends went to the hotel where the girl stayed and went strait to her room. They didn’t find a no disturb sign so they knocked:

Georg: nobody’s answering!
Bill: try again!!

They tried many times after realizing that there was no one inside. So they went to the reception desk:

Receptionist: hello, how may I help you?
Bill: we were wondering if you know anything about the person in room 384?
Receptionist: oh I’m sorry, I can’t give you such information.

Since the receptionist was a girl, Tom had no way but to start flirting with her! He pushes his brother and starts:

Tom *with a big smile on his face*: hey! How are you?
Receptionist: hello, sir.
Tom: what’s your name?
Receptionist: my name is Juliet.
Tom: what a beautiful name! on such a beautiful girl!
Receptionist *blushes*: thank you! what’s your name?
Tom: I’m tom KAULITZ
Receptionist: OMG that’s so cool! I’m such a fan but I didn’t believe you were the real guy when I first saw you!! can I have an autograph?
Tom: of course, anything for the pretty lady!

Tom signs a piece of paper she handed him. Then he remembers what they were there for, and as he was just about to ask her, she interrupts him:

Receptionist: so, what brings you to this hotel?
Tom: it’s a pretty long story but I needed to know some stuff about the girl in room 384...
Receptionist: look I can only tell you that her name was Lucretia and she checked out a few hours ago...
Tom: but do you know where she went?
Receptionist: I’m sorry I don’t know... she didn’t speak much... but I remember her asking the taxi driver to take her to the bus station heading to Hamburg...
Tom: thx for the info, I really appreciate it!
Bill: yeah thanks!
Georg: let’s go!! We don’t have much time if we want to find her.

Then on the way out, bill trips on what seemed like a rock but when he looked down he saw a red box. The four boys looked at the thing they found with wonder. Bill opened the the bax and found a letter that he read aloud:

Bill: "hello dearest heartbreaker, you did not come. Your twin convinced you. Now both, you shall suffer from this betrayal. Where you are, I will be... Find me..."
Tom: Oh No!
Georg: I’m speechless!
Gustav: OMG!
Bill: for the first time, I’m so scared...
Georg: don’t worry! We have to find her if she’ll be where we are...
Bill: oh yeah! And do what?? There’s no use!! We can’t do anything if we find her!
Tom: no!! we’ll make her stop doing what she’s doing and get this lunatic arrested!
Bill: ok but plz help me!

OMG OMGGGGG
WT IS SHE GONNA DO TO THEMMMM? O.O
PLZ DT HURT TOMMMMMM
WAAAAAAAAAAAAA3

i love it!!!!!!!! ktir 7ilweh il ossa!!!

wooooooooooooooooow rly awesome, u shld give the script to a director so he can turn it to a horror movie and i'll be the frist to go and watch it!! sounds gr8 woohoo yeh yeh i know back to the "moment"!

thx i thought about turning my fanfictins into movies!! *imagines* i would love to do it!!
thx for all ur positive comments

my dear dear dear readers!! this is the last chapter of my fan fic!! i hope u all enjoyed it!!!
xoxo LoVe <3



Chapter 9: the confrontation...

So confused the three boys went to their hotel and started work out the letter. They finally realized that they can’t follow her just then, they had to wait until she follows them. Then they will figure out where she is. After all, they were sure she was following them since she went to Hamburg, where their next concert will be...

The next morning they were on their way to Hamburg. Then the concert...
Bill sang as usual with his beautiful voice. Then he looked through the fans and saw a card. The girl that was holding it was wearing all black. She had her face toward the ground so he couldn’t see it clearly. Unusually he focused on what was written on that card: “next to you hotel, midnight...”

He memorized it and then, after the concert, with his 4 friends, he went to a hotel near theirs...
He went in and searched for Lucretia. She was staying in the same room: 384. he knocked!

Bill: open up! It’s midnight! I’m here!
Lucretia: but you’re with your friends!
Bill: you can open up and then we’ll talk!

She opens the door just a few centimeters... the four boys enter a huge dark room that doesn’t seem a part of this hotel... they all turn in fright as the door closed slowly and yet quickly, locking them in, and showing a young girl behind it. She was so pale. Maybe it was because of the white powder she put all over her face in contrast with her black lipstick and eye shadow. Then she lifted her eyes and looked at them. Her eyes were full of tears and anger. She got closer to bill. Turned around him. Stood behind him. Whispered in his ear: “why?”. Meanwhile the three other boys back up to the corner all shocked...
Then she looked in her spell book and mumbled a few words. Then bill turned to look at her and she instantly pointed her two hands towards him. A bouquet of thin waves of white light came out of every finger, wrapped him up and started to drag him magically toward her. Tom and the three boys rush over and start to pull their hypnotized friend away from that person. They start to succeed, but he suddenly slips and they fall down on the floor! Tom couldn’t watch that anymore, so with a mirror in his hands, he jumps in between the two and turns the rays toward the curtains. These get pulled off the ceiling and hit the girl’s head and she fainted. The room then lost any source of light. So gustav, georg and tom lifted bill up from the floor and carried him out of that room.

Tom: Bill! Bill! Answer me!
Bill: what was that?
Georg: I’m calling the police!
Gustav: I’ll call the security guards!

Tom told bill everything and helped him get up. The police then got there and arrested the girl, then burned that damned spell book with all those wicked SpEllS!

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this story is P.E.R.F.E.C.T, awesome, amazin', incredible, splendid,..... waaaaaaaaaaa333333333 i'm rly in love wiz this story!!!
What? it's the end of the story!? no no no plz i don't want it to end!
i'm waitin' for u to write another one, plz don't be late!