I'm an alien.

Subject: I'm an alien. Sat Sep 18, 2010 7:01 pm

So this is my new story. I'm not sure every chapter would be this long.
But please tell me what you think. Should i continue?

Chapter 1

'Dude! What do you think you're doing?!' - Sandy looked at Bill in shock when he invited two girls from their school on Sandy's upcoming birthday party.
'I'm...planning your birthday?'
'No, you're not. Because there won't be my birthday. Let's just keep it a secret.'
'But-'
'No, Bill. Please, don't tell anyone else about my stupid birthday.'
'Eh, why aren't you excited about it like all the other normal people?'
'I'm obviously not normal then.'
'Obviously.' - Bill got disappointed when Sandy forbade him to make her a birthday party.
They continued their walk to school in silence. Bill was a type of person who liked to be surrounded with people and friends. But Sandy, in the other hand, was a loner. She didn't like making new friends, she didn't trust people. The only person she could really rely on was Bill. They've been best friends since the kindergarten. He was the only kid that she wanted to play with.
'But you're turning 18!' - Bill finally uttered, practically begging Sandy to let him throw her a party.
'NO!' - she yelled and continued walking and leaving Bill standing behind her, looking her with his puppy eyes.
He ran to her - 'Why not?!' Come on, give me one good reason.'
'Because you know i don't like being surrounded with lots of people. Please Bill, leave me alone and forget about my birthday.'
'Your birthday?' - someone's voice appeared behind them.
'Crap.' - Sandy stopped, slowly turning, knowing who was there.
'When is your birthday, Sandy?' - Tom asked with a smile on his face.
'Never'. - she sarcastically answered.
'Come on, let's celebrate it. Maybe we even get you a boyfriend.' - he continued smiling.
'No, no and get that stupid smile off of your face.'
At that moment, two other boys came to them.
'Georg, help me! Us two are similar, right?' - Sandy ran to the first guy - 'Help me to discourage them of celebrating my birthday.' - Sandy took Georg for his sleeve and started pulling him down.
She thought he'd help her but he asked instead - 'Your birthday?' - and smiled.
'No. No, no, no, no, no. No! You too?' - Sandy started panicking when she saw Georg was interested about her birthday, too.
'What?' - Georg and Tom were still smiling.
'Gustie?' - Sandy asked, looking at Gustav, the other guy, with puppy eyes.
'Hmm. Yes! Yes! I'm on Sandy's side one hundred percents. If she doesn't want to hear about that party, then stop talking about it. She doesn't want to be involved. Am i right, Sandy?'
'Yes, you are, Gummy bear.' - Sandy smiled now.
'So throw her a surprise party.' - Gustav ended.
Boys started laughing. Sandy's face got all gloomy and cranky. She realized there's no help. They would continue planning and talking about it either way. So she continued walking to school, with these four boys, friends of her, behind her, talking about her 'surprise party'.

'We have an English class, right?' - Tom asked when they entered the school.
'Yeah.' - Sandy answered.
'Oh, oh, i thought you're not talking to us.' - he started provoking.
She turned and gave him that deadly look.
'Bye guys.' - Tom said to other boys and followed Sandy to the classroom they had an English class together.
Bill, Tom, Gustie and Georg were persons Sandy considered as best friends, tho Bill was the one she told ALL her secrets to. Something in him made her believe him with her whole heart and mind.
'So, Sandy..' - Tom started when they sat at the desk together. - 'What are you doing this evening?'
'Today?' - she was taking her books out of her bag.
'Yes.'
'I don't know. Probably hanging out with you guys.'
'I thought you don't wanna hang out with us anymore.'
She looked at him confused - 'Where did you get that idea?'
'Emm. Our walk to school.'
'It was because you were annoying. I really don't want a' - she got closer to Tom and whispered on his ear - 'birthday party.'
He started laughing - 'Okay. Sorry about that. Well anyway, would you like to...hang out with me?'
'Of course' - she smiled - 'I'll see you and Bill tonight. I'll be home alone. You two can come.' - she winkled.
'Oh. No, no.' - Tom answered quickly.
'What?' - she got confused again.
'I meant like - only us two. No other guys.'
'Ok. Only two buddies hanging. Sure.'
'Ahh.' - he sigh - 'Not a buddy night or whatever. I'm like...asking you out. On a date.' - he smiled.
'Ow. Owww.' - she realized what he asked her and then she started laughing.
'What? What?' - now he was confused with her reaction.
'I see Bill didn't tell you that.'
'Didn't tell me what?'
'Hehe.'
'What? Sandy! Are you two already going out?'
'Haha no! It's just... Tom, i don't go out with... guys.'
'What do you mean?'
'Tom, i'm gay.' - Sandy said and he remained totally messed out and shocked.

Subject: Re: I'm an alien. Sat Sep 18, 2010 8:55 pm

Wow, at the end that was a shock lol XD I'm gonna write about a gay guy and I seriously can't get in my mind how to start it XD lol You should continue it, it seems really interesting and....fascinating Razz

Subject: Re: I'm an alien. Sun Sep 19, 2010 3:16 pm

hahaha yeah. i'm not sure how will people like it Razz

aaa lol, awesome Very Happy

hehe okay, thankies

Subject: Re: I'm an alien. Sun Sep 19, 2010 3:32 pm

Well, it takes a while for the readers to sink in the character story line, if the writers good (which you are) the readers will enjoy reading it Smile

No problemo Razz

Subject: Re: I'm an alien. Mon Sep 20, 2010 5:27 pm

lolol, i hope *-*
oh, i gotta say you make me kinda happy everytime i see your comment, you're always so.. bright Razz

Subject: Re: I'm an alien. Mon Sep 20, 2010 6:58 pm

CHAPTER 2

'You.. y-you are what?' - Tom felt like there was a noodle in his throat.
Sandy smiled - 'Sorry. I know this was kind of unexpected.'
'Kind of?' - he was still trying to sense himself.
She smiled again and turned to the blackboard - 'Teacher's here.'
He didn't look at the teacher, he continued looking at Sandy. Finally, she looked him - 'Tom, are you okay?'
'Emm. Yeah.'
'I don't want this to ruin our friendship. Tom. I'm sorry if this was shocking. I thought it was obvious.'
'It would be if you had any female friends!!' - he said loudly.
'Shh!' - she tried to calm him down.
'Is something wrong, mister Kaulitz?' - the teacher asked.
'No, no, he read something...' - Sandy said instead of Tom.
Then she turned back to him and quietly continued - 'Are we okay?'
He finally looked her in the eyes - 'Yes. We're great.' - and smiled.
'Good.' - she smiled back.
They both turned to the blackboard. One moment of silence passed when Tom quickly added - 'You wouldn't mind kissing with a girl in front of me?'
'Shut the hell up, Tom. You're disgusting.'

'How was English, guys?' - Gustav asked in the canteen on the launch break.
'Dude, it was awful. We got tons of homework and Mr. Thomas said we're having an exam next time. Like awesome.' - Sandy said as she plunged into the chair and threw the plate with the sandwich and an apple on the table, sitting between Bill and Georg.
'That man's crazy.' - Georg agreed.
'It was very interesting, i would say.' - Tom said as he came after Sandy, also answering Gustav's question.
'Tom, they already know.' - Sandy told him.
'We already know what?' - Bill looked first as Sandy, then at Tom.
'Ah. You know, about me' - Sandy pointed at herself with her both hands - ' and my orientation.' - and made quotation marks when she said that last word.
'Oh. Oooh. Haha, yeah, what with that?' - guys asked.
Tom confusedly looked them - 'Oh?'
They all laughed and continued talking about something else while Tom was only staring at them.

'I guess nothing changed.' - Bill said while him and Sandy were slowly walking home from school.
They were alone, without other guys. Walking on the winter cold.
'Nothing?' - she seemed pretty sad. 'I'm sorry to hear that.'
'Me too. I just hope i'll get the chance to do some things i haven't done yet.' - he started thinking about some things in his life.
'Like what?'
'I always wanted to start a band. To have a real girlfriend. Get really drunk. Which is not so possible now. And obviously won't ever be.'
'Hey! Don't say that. We'll beat that stupid cancer together. Okay? I'll be by your side the whole time.' - Sandy took Bill's hand and started jumping while walking.
'Haha what are you doing?'
'It's so freaking cold. I'm trying to warm up.'
Bill smiled and joined Sandy in jumping, forgetting about his terrible brain cancer he was dying of.

Subject: Re: I'm an alien. Tue Sep 21, 2010 6:34 pm

*BANG!!!* Another hit! Lol, you just keep coming with those new ideas, wow, you hocked me from the first chapter! Very Happy

Awwwie thanks ^^ You just made me happy with your reply Razz

XD

Subject: Re: I'm an alien. Wed Sep 22, 2010 5:32 am

This is cool! The first chapter was a complete shock!
I like it Smile

Post soon, wanna know more about this!

Subject: Re: I'm an alien. Wed Sep 22, 2010 3:59 pm

@Annie : ehehe. yeah. thanks (: <3
haha wahey!

@Sophie : lol yes. i wasn't so sure about writing of a gay chick, but eh Razz

umm, and thankies (: <3

Subject: Re: I'm an alien. Wed Sep 22, 2010 7:38 pm

CHAPTER 3

'Dude, my mom will be so pissed off!' - Sandy yelled as she took up a broken vase.
'You pushed it, not me!' - Tom tried to justify himself tho he knew he broke it.
'I haven't even touched it.'
'Yes, you did. You turned and pushed it with your arm.'
'Bullshit!'
'Man, you totally broke it.' - Georg was on Sandy's side, as always.
'Thanks Georg. ' - Sandy winkled at Georg.
'Yeah, of course he's on your side. Because he freaking loves you.' - Tom pointed at Georg then crossed his arms.
'Haha are you gonna cry now? Ha? Ha? Come on, Tommie, let's face it. My mom's gonna kill you.' - Sandy smiled.
All of a sudden, Bill fast-walked to the room while they were discussing, took Sandy's hand and took her to another room in her house.
Her smile disappeared from her face and she got worried - 'Bill?'
'I'm not having a surgery.'
'A?'
'Doctors told me i could have a surgery and they could take out...that.' - he rolled his eyes.
'A! That's great. It means you could fully recover.'
'But i'm not having a surgery.'
'What? Why not?!' - she looked at him confusedly.
'I'm scared, Sandy.'
'Honey, i told you i'm going to be by your side the whole time.'
'Eh, still. I'm not having it. I just wanted to tell you that.'
She continued looking at him disappointed, knowing so soon she won't have her best friend anymore.
'Please, don't say this to Tom or Gustav or Georg.'
'W-why?'
'If they ask anything, just say you don't know anything.'
'Why don't you just tell them the truth? And why did you tell this to me?'
'Because i trust you. And i know i can count on you.' - he smiled his famous Kaulitz twin smile - 'And i don't want them to be worried.'
'You think i'm not now?'
'You will understand me when you think about it a little bit more.'
'Uff...'
Sandy came back to the living room where Tom was still holding that broken vase and talking to Gustav and Georg.
'Okay, Sandy, i will pay the damage.' - Tom finally admitted .
'Emm, okay. Guys, i'm really tired. So could we somehow cancel this association?'
'Ow.'
Guys immediately took their school bags and walked to the front door, saying 'bye' on their way out. They definitely didn't want to be around when Sandy's mom see what have they done with her vase.
Sandy leaned down the front door as boys came out and started crying. Cognition of losing a person she's been calling 'bestie' for 15 years just messed her inside.

'Billie!' - Sandy came to Bill from his back. They were on their way home from school.
She took his hand and pulled him with her.
'Where are we going?' - he barely said while they were running. He was trying to breathe normally, but the rush was to big.
They finally came to some building with a garage in front of it.
'Sandy?' - Bill asked when they stopped there.
'Go inside.'
'You want my heart to stop beating, eh?'
'Of course not. Just go inside. I have a surprise for you.'
Bill listened to her and opened the garage door. He saw his 3 friends sitting on the chairs, with the music instruments leaned on the floor.
'What's happening here?'
Guys smiled when they saw him standing there.
'This is one of your wishes, right? To have a band?' - Sandy asked him behind him.
'Well, yeah. But..' - Bill answered.
'Then go in there and rock the world!'

Subject: Re: I'm an alien. Wed Sep 22, 2010 8:03 pm

This is turning out to be more interesting than the start! Keep up the good work! Very Happy

Post soon! Very Happy

Subject: Re: I'm an alien. Thu Sep 23, 2010 2:07 am

oooooooooooooooo this is getting better and better, but why doesn't Bill want to have the surgery? he shouldn't be scared, it's for his sake, tell him that!
I have to know what happens so post soon!

Subject: Re: I'm an alien. Thu Sep 23, 2010 3:42 pm

lol thanks both of you Very Happy

i'll try to do next chap asap (;
<3<3

Subject: Re: I'm an alien. Fri Sep 24, 2010 11:52 am

No problem Smile

Hehe yayy! Can't wait Very Happy

Subject: Re: I'm an alien. Fri Sep 24, 2010 1:11 pm

Yayi ^^

Subject: Re: I'm an alien. Mon Sep 27, 2010 8:28 pm

CHAPTER 4

'To do w-what?' - Bill looked at Sandy in shock. - 'Dude, i can't sing.'
Sandy started laughing - 'You can't sing?'
He got confused - 'Yes, I can't sing.'
She continued laughing - 'Man, you sing better than...that Lambert guy from American Idol.'
Guys laughed and Tom stood up - 'Come on, Bill, we heard you singing. You're great. And even if you aren't, it's just us five here. Nobody else will hear you.' - he taunted.
'Yeah, thanks a lot.' - Bill rolled his eyes - 'But no thanks.'
Sandy came closer to Bill, put her hands on his shoulders and shook him - 'Bill! Why not? You said you wanted to have a band. Like that's your unfulfilled wish. So here you go now.'
Bill looked at other guys - 'You can play...instruments?'
'Private lessons, remember?' - Gustav replied and took his drum sticks.
'Man, i'm awesome at playing a bass.' – Georg commend himself.
‘Hah! Yeah, like my grandpa.’ – Tom commented Georg statement.
Georg looked at Tom - ‘Oh, ya, you playing a guitar is a whole lot of fun to hear. Pff.’
Tom taunted again.
‘So I really have to sing now?’ – Bill asked.
‘Of course not’ – Sandy answered – ‘Only if you want to.’
Bill looked at the front door of the garage, when Sandy said ‘no’, guessing he wanted to live.
‘So I have to sing.’ – Bill realized.
G’s and Tom prepared for playing their instrument, but Bill was still motionlessly standing.

‘Dude, that was awesome.’ – Sandy said sitting next to Bill, at the hospital.
‘First of all – you say ‘dude’ a lot.’
Sandy smiled.
‘And second of all’ – Bill continued – ‘yeah, it was kinda good.’
‘Uuu, we became to much confident.’ – she replied.
‘Hah. Uf, man, I’m scared.’
‘Don’t be. I’m sure the results are-‘ – she stopped when she saw Bill looked at her ironically. – ‘Okay. They can’t be good. But if you would go on that surgery, things may get better, Bill.’
‘No.’ – he quickly replied.
‘Why not?! I still don’t get it.’
‘Sandy… I know my…death’ – he took a deep breath – ‘will be painful. I just… don’t want it. The surgery. And… eh.’ – he couldn’t continue talking about that stupid little think that was literally killing him.
Tears fulfilled Sandy’s and Bill’s eyes.
‘Don’t cry, Nass. It’s not worth of your tears.’ – Bill tried to comfort her while they were still in the waiting room at the hospital.
‘I freaking love you, you dumb ass. And I want you in my life as longer as possible. And that surgery could maybe save your butt. But…’ – she wiped away her tears with her shirt sleeve – ‘I’ll respect your decision. Eh, okay?’
They were both crying now, already missing each other.
The nurse came into the waiting room and called Bill’s name. Bill and Sandy looked at her in tears.
‘I’ll be back.’ – Bill said as he stood up and went after the nurse.
‘You better do.’ – she said after him.

'Soooo?' - Sandy ran to Bill when he came out of the doctor's office after an hour.
'Mm, let's go.' - he was rushing here.
'What? What?' - Nass got even more curious.
'Everything's okay.'
'What does it mean?'
'Let's go. We'll talk later. I said guys we'll be at the garage in half an hour.'
She just looked at him confused and followed him to his car.

Subject: Re: I'm an alien. Tue Sep 28, 2010 4:10 am

I love this!! But I have to know the results.... he has to be ok or else I'll cry 1000 seas. Sad

Subject: Re: I'm an alien. Tue Sep 28, 2010 2:47 pm

I need to know! I need to know!!!! XD PLEASE post sooooooon! I can't wait!! >< I don't want to wait.... Razz

Keep it up! Seriously I need to get a grip XD

Subject: Re: I'm an alien. Wed Sep 29, 2010 7:11 pm

@Sophie : awwwi *-*
okay, now i started singing '1000 oceans' xD <3
@Annie : ahahaha. okay okay :O
<3<3

Subject: Re: I'm an alien. Wed Sep 29, 2010 7:36 pm

Post soon! Very Happy

Subject: Re: I'm an alien. Wed Sep 29, 2010 9:56 pm

CHAPTER 5

'So what now?' - Sandy asked while they were sitting in the car, looking straight in front of them, through the car window, not really knowing what to tell to each other.
'Nothing. Just don't tell that to guys.' - Bill answered
'Why not? You don't want them to know that you're gonna die in...' - she didn't finish. She couldn't finish her sentence. Tears fulfilled her eyes again and she put her hands on her face to cover it. She barely said 'die', but the fact that he'll be gone sooner than she thought messed her up. It wasn't what she was expecting. Of course she knew cancer is such a bad illness. But she didn't want to accept the walkout of her bestie.
She opened the car door and stepped out. She started walking to the garage where guys were having a rehearsal. Bill came out too and followed her. She was walking really fast.
'Nass, please don't say anything!' - he yelled behind her.
'You can't keep this a secret, Bill. Not from them.' - she replied not even looking back at him.
He ran to her, took her for her arm and turned her to him - 'Sandy! It is my life! They will look at me different if you tell them i'll be...gone...in two months. I don't want them to worry that much. Keep it for yourself.'
'Or what?!' - she asked back.
'Or i'll never forgive you that betrayal. You're the only one i can talk to without any fears. Without any doubts. Don't change that.' - he told her with a strong voice.
She was looking at him still with some tears in her eyes. She wrested her arm out of his and started walking to the garage again. She opened the door and came in so fast and strong that guys looked at her confused.
'Hey.' - Tom said.
'Guys...' - Sandy started. - 'I gotta tell you something.'
At that moment, Bill came into the garage. She turned and looked at him. She remembered his words again. She didn't want to betray his trust. And she definitely didn't want them to stop hanging out, she already knew she didn't have much time left with him.
'I...' - she looked back at Bill and then at guys - 'wanna ask you if you'd like to have your own solo concert? I could talk to some people.' - she smiled.
'Dudeee!'
'That's awesome!'
'Imagine us, new... i don't know, Rolling stones.'
'Nah. Aerosmith!' - Tom, Georg and Gustav started talking.
'Thank you.' - Bill whispered to Sandy when he walked next to her on the way to sit on the chair.

'Yes?' - somebody knocked on Sandy's door. She opened the door and saw Tom standing there.
'Tom, is something wrong?'
'You gotta come with me.' - he said in a hurry.
'Umm. I'm kinda bussy.' - she nodded, pointing at her apartment.
'I don't care if you have somebody in there. Just come.' - he took her hand.
'Dude, i'm on a date!'
'Is SHE more important than Bill?'
'What?'
'You gotta come with me. He...is in a hospital. I should have told you that when we'd arrive there, but you're a hard stone.' - he rolled his eyes.
'Bill's in the hospital!?' - she yelled and took Tom's hand to follow him to his car.