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Karen~483 TH Are My Ecstasy
Number of posts : 450 Age : 24 Location : ................... Registration date : 2009-12-14
| Subject: Re: Rooms with a view Thu Jul 01, 2010 10:50 am | |
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LelylovesBill Bill's Favourite Fan
Number of posts : 4828 Age : 28 Location : Croatia Registration date : 2010-04-05
| Subject: Re: Rooms with a view Thu Jul 01, 2010 11:49 am | |
| awwwwwwwwww ROZ, DON'T FUCKING MARRY ERIC!!! haha i'd yell this at her if it was real omg! awesome chapters hon *.* sorry for not commenting before xP post soon! post soon! post soon!<3 | |
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Crane Kaulitz TH Are My Ecstasy
Number of posts : 502 Age : 28 Location : Lahore Registration date : 2010-06-09
| Subject: Re: Rooms with a view Thu Jul 01, 2010 12:59 pm | |
| No problem Well you'll find out who she marries | |
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Crane Kaulitz TH Are My Ecstasy
Number of posts : 502 Age : 28 Location : Lahore Registration date : 2010-06-09
| Subject: Re: Rooms with a view Fri Jul 02, 2010 11:02 am | |
| Well, this is the last part. I put my pen down and I'm gonna concentrate more on Dreams know.
Part 17
Time lapse: 2 years
Third person:
It had been two years since Roz had been engaged to Eric, Bill wasn’t getting any better, and he was getting worse. The doctors gave up on him but just gave him an ICD with a pacemaker to help his heart. Roz was in love with Bill, and wanted to visit him in hospital everyday but Eric would only let her visit only once a week.
Roz’s pov:
I hated being with Eric, he was so controlling. I wish I never would have said yes when he wanted to marry me. I hated my life now and to see Bill like that always hurt my heart. I loved Bill and wanted to confess my feelings to him but I’m engaged to Eric. I had feelings of hate and resentment and I wanted to be alone and sometimes I wanted to be with Bill all the time. How I hate my life, it’s just so stupid and evil. My dad died two weeks after I was engaged to Eric. My life collapsed around me and I knew my life was a small fire on its last embers. I was walking on the street with Eric, I just wanted to punch his face because he wouldn’t let me go and visit Bill today. I was so angry was I took off my ring and threw it on Eric’s face. ‘Eric, you grumpy old sod! I hate you! I can’t live with you, I want to marry someone else. I can’t marry you! I am leaving,’ I screamed at him and ran in the direction of the hospital. I went straight to Bill’s room and the first thing I did was hug him. ‘Selena, you just came yesterday?’ Bill asked. ‘Bill, I can’t live without you, I don’t know what happens to me when I’m around you. I know that you might think I’m mad, but I broke up with Eric. I hated him. And Bill …..Bill, I love you!’ I replied. ‘I love you too ……’ when Bill said that, I heard a long sound. It wasn’t stopping and I realized Bill wasn’t breathing. NO! Bill can’t die! I can’t live without him. I love him, and when I confessed my feelings he died! I couldn’t control myself; I was crying so much I didn’t notice when the doctors came in. After that someone gave me an injection and I fainted.
Time lapse: 4 years
Roz’s pov:
It has been four years since Bill had died. My feelings and emotions were all blocked out. I knew it was deal but I didn’t care, I just wanted Bill to come back to me. I was going to the graveyard where Bill was buried, I went to his stone and placed some flowers on it. I took of the ring which Bill gave me, I had put it in a necklace and put it there. ‘Bill, you’ll always be in my heart. I love you,’ I said and I felt a presence behind me. I looked but no one was there, I heard the wind say ‘Roz, I love you too.’ And I figured out it was Bill. I have never forgotten him and I never will, as it said the first cut is the deepest and mine just won’t go away.
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Karen~483 TH Are My Ecstasy
Number of posts : 450 Age : 24 Location : ................... Registration date : 2009-12-14
| Subject: Re: Rooms with a view Fri Jul 02, 2010 9:53 pm | |
| awwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
that is the saddest thing i ever read in my entire life!!!! im fighting back the tears!!! </3
your fic is just awesome!!!! plain amazing!!! i cant find the right words to describe it!!!
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LelylovesBill Bill's Favourite Fan
Number of posts : 4828 Age : 28 Location : Croatia Registration date : 2010-04-05
| Subject: Re: Rooms with a view Fri Jul 02, 2010 11:35 pm | |
| i'm amazed! so freaking amazed! this is wonderful, no other words to describe it you're a great writer, i love all your chaps
<3<3<3 | |
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AHz-7♥ Rockin With Tokio Hotel
Number of posts : 1389 Age : 28 Location : Middle East, dubai. Registration date : 2010-03-18
| Subject: Re: Rooms with a view Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:36 am | |
| Awwhh, Touching :') .. I love your story | |
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Crane Kaulitz TH Are My Ecstasy
Number of posts : 502 Age : 28 Location : Lahore Registration date : 2010-06-09
| Subject: Re: Rooms with a view Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:17 pm | |
| I'm really glad you guys liked it :) I actually had another ending, but I don't why I changed it. But thanks for reading it, I'm really happy :)) | |
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Karen~483 TH Are My Ecstasy
Number of posts : 450 Age : 24 Location : ................... Registration date : 2009-12-14
| Subject: Re: Rooms with a view Sat Jul 03, 2010 2:51 pm | |
| anytime sweety!!!
i enjoyed every second of it!!! xD <3 | |
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Crane Kaulitz TH Are My Ecstasy
Number of posts : 502 Age : 28 Location : Lahore Registration date : 2010-06-09
| Subject: Re: Rooms with a view Sat Jul 03, 2010 3:10 pm | |
| Awwwi thanks | |
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Karen~483 TH Are My Ecstasy
Number of posts : 450 Age : 24 Location : ................... Registration date : 2009-12-14
| Subject: Re: Rooms with a view Sat Jul 03, 2010 3:14 pm | |
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