Rooms with a view

nice plot!!! I really like your fic!!! keep it up!!! xD <3

Thanks I've never written that much. I always leave stories in the middle
Looks like now people reading it I won't =P

heheh you're welcome!!
hehe yeah..when people are interested it helps you write more to surprise them..hehe

Yeah, it helps

wahey! this is awesome ^^
with every chap, i love it more and more
btw, congratulations for braking your own record ;D<3

Thanks I'll be posting soon

Part 11

Bill’s pov:

I got up still feeling a little groggy, thank God my fevers gone! I changed my clothes and went outside. Tom, Gustav and Georg where already sitting at the table. ‘Hey guys,’ I said. ‘Hi Bill,’ they replied altogether. I went and sat on the sofa and Georg asked ‘Bill, are you married?’ ‘Why would you think such a thing?’ I asked. ‘Because there is a golden ring on your ring finger,’ he replied. Oh man! They had to notice that I have a golden band on my finger. ‘This is mine, I bought it for myself,’ I thought of an excuse. ‘Do I hear wedding bells?’ asked Tom ‘Yeah ring a ding ding,’ I replied sarcastically. It was really irritating when other people intrude in your personal life. I went out because of their stupid behavior, they were so juvenile!

But why can’t I get this stupid ring off of me? I went to a coffee shop and ordered a Zimbabwe latte with biscotti. I was really lost in thought when someone just pulled me back on Earth, it was Roz! She was here, right in front of me! ‘H …hi Roz,’ I stuttered. ‘Hey Bill, how has it been?’ she asked as she sat down on the chair in front of me. ‘It’s been great, how about you?’ I asked. ‘Yeah …everything is ……great,’ she replied solemnly. ‘Roz? What is it?’ I asked. ‘Nothing,’ she replied with the same tone in her voice. ‘There has to be something,’ I said. ‘Oh, I'm sorry to make you worried but …Eric broke up with me,’ she replied. ‘He did?’ I tried to comfort her.
‘Yes. He said he couldn't commit to me and his music. He had to stay focused. I knew it was an excuse - I've heard his music! He must have another girl,’ she replied sobbing. ‘Well, he's a fool, Roz, and if he can't appreciate you then you're better off without him,’ I clarified her. ‘Right now, I'm not so sure, but thank you, Bill,’ she said.

She had never been this sad in her life. I wish I could’ve helped her. ‘Do you mind if I ask you something?’ she asked. ‘No, go right ahead,’ I replied. ‘Are you happy?’ she asked and I started thinking. ‘Did you hear the question?’ she asked. ‘Yes, I'm thinking. It's a seemingly complex question,’ I replied. ‘No, it's not,’ she said. ‘Yes, it is,’ I said. ‘No, it's not. Either you're happy or you're not,’ she said and again. ‘Are you happy?’ I asked. ‘No, but we're not talking about me,’ she replied. Oh, let's not just gloss over that. You, my only friend, has just told me you're not happy and it pains me to hear that, so why?’ I asked. ‘Well, it’s Eric ……,’ she said. ‘Oh forget about him. He was not worth it, he was not sophisticated and he was ill mannered to do such a thing to a lady,’ I consoled her. ‘Thanks, I’ll try to forget about him,’ she said and I just got lost in her eyes.

Cool. Roz broke up with Eric, does this mean that Bill could have a chance?
Nice chapter, post soon!!

great chapter!! keep it up and post soon!!! xD <3

Thanks xD I'll post another chapter by tomorrow, if I can =P

hehe take your time!!! xD

Part 12

Bill’s pov:

She was so beautiful; do I still have a chance? Should I tell her? ‘You know, to take your mind off of Eric, why don’t we go somewhere?’ I asked, hoping she would say some place romantic. ‘Like?’ she asked. ‘Uh ……the mall,’ I suggested. You idiot, that place is not romantic! ‘Okay, let’s go,’ she said and got up. I took her to the nearest mall that came in sight. We were only browsing around when my eyes fell on a guitar. I held it and sat on a chair, I saw Roz, aimlessly walking, thinning about Eric. I started to play the guitar and sang World behind my wall. I never knew how to play the guitar but I was playing it somehow. I put the guitar down and went to Roz, when I finished the song.

‘How did you know?’ she asked. ‘What?’ I asked to what she was asking. ‘How did you know that when someone plays the guitar, I get lost in my own world of thoughts,’ she replied. I just got an idea; I grabbed her hand and ran towards the small stage in the mall. I went up the stage with Roz along. ‘Let’s sing a song,’ I suggested. ‘What do you mean?’ she asked looking confused. ‘Why not sing a song? It’ll get your mind off of things; you know the lyrics to the song World behind my wall right? Why not sing it together? Without instruments,’ I said. ‘In front of all these people?’ she asked nervously. ‘I’ll be right beside you, don’t worry,’ I confirmed her. I looked towards the people and to get their attention I said ‘Hello! As you might know me form my band Tokio Hotel, that I’m Bill Kaulitz. I’m going to perform one song for you all with my friend Roz Fletcher and without instruments, World behind my wall.’ Some people formed a group and started clapping.

I sang the first verse alone, she was just standing there. I took her hand and looked into her eyes while singing and she started to sing along with me. I loved singing along with Roz, she had such a beautiful voice and when the song ended the audience clapped endlessly. I turned towards Roz and she hugged me tight with her arms around my neck.

awww!! thats soooo romantic!!!! <3 <3 i love it!! keep writing!!! xD

Thanks
If you want I can post the next chapter right now.

awwwww... nice chapter <33

anytime..<3
no if you wanna post it then do it..you're the writer..
hehe its not up to us if you should post a chapter or not!! xD

I couldn't wait anymore lol
Once I type a chapter I have to post it. I have no patience at all.
So, here ya go!

Part 13

Bill’s pov:

Roz was hugging me, I couldn’t believe it. Does she like me? As she pulled out of the hug she said ‘Bill, you are a great friend!’ I was so happy that she likes me and considers me as a friend. As we were walking down the stage, she hugged me again and this time it felt like a bear hug from a best friend. ‘Bill, you made me forget about Eric, you’re my bestest friend ever,’ she said and I blushed during the hug. We went out of the mall, I was having the greatest time of my life, I couldn’t believe that Roz was here with me. Maybe Feramirg was right, I asked, the universe answered and I received it, and Roz is here with me.

‘Bill, I have to go home, dad must be really worried and I now I don’t have Eric anymore,’ she said. ‘Uh, okay, you can go back to your dad,’ I said. She gave me a quick hug and said ‘See you tomorrow.’ She had hugged me three times today. Wow, I never would have thought that she would hug me three times in one day! And know, I can meet her everyday. Yayy me. I went back to my apartment and knocked the door. Tom opened it and I went straight to my room without talking to him or anyone else. I wanted this feeling to never leave me. It was so great, I felt like I was on top of the world! I am in love! And I hope she loves me back. I fell back on my bed, recalling the first day I had met her. I loved her since then and now she finally likes me.

I went into day dreaming, the headlines for newspapers, gossip magazines and videos about ‘Bill Kaulitz has a girlfriend?’ ‘Bill Kaulitz loves Roz Fletcher’ He can die for her, so sweet.’ Then Perez Hilton’s blog came into my mind and I shuddered at the thought. Then I asked myself, do I really love Roz? Or is it just a crush or infatuation? No, I really love her, it is love. I know and I believed form the bottom of my heart that I love her. I was so high in energy, I didn’t know how I feel asleep.

aww!! Billy's in love!!! so cute!!! hehe

i wonder if that would happen in real life..that if he met the one hed start thinking about what people will have to say about her..and the gossiping and the newspapers and magazines..hehe..

awesome chapter!!! keep it up..and i know how impatient you get once you have a chapter done!! i have 3 right now..hehe but im taking my time with posting!! lol

I'm also writing another story along with this one, it's a drag when you have to type a long story. I'm posting that one on Facebook, and I only have one reader lol I'm posting this one everyday and that one after a week =P

add me on facebook!! i wanna check out the other story!!! hehe

im Karen Tannous on fb..im on right now..so add me!!

Okies

omg!! i love the story on facebook!!!
it so darn good!!! im addicted!! i wanna know what happens next!!

you have to post it here!! its really amazing!!! xD

Hehe, thanks. I thought that one wasn't as good as this one.
I'll post it here too, but I think it's too long.

so what its long!!! thats whats addictive about it!!
once you start you cant stop reading..if it was a book it would be a page-turner!! lol

Thanks, I'm motivated.
I'll post it